Adookorn Auaduma

INSANITY

Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359

14 days ago

do drugs
to lift up his ego

Wild fire flare
from the bosom of fantasy

bedevil the mindset of addicted wretch
his frayed life feed on
petals of drug

inferno of hallucination whirl,
pop up a scarlet-coloured imagination
with pulverise threat

voices from behind question
his legality of living in pen
and staying among men

irenic talk chime
bell of gossip and quarrel

his appetite forbids
plushy dish

a broom in the hand
of a child, slug
and machete to take his dummy life

solitary and exhausted
on alley of blues
flee
to the coop
from tyrannous reality

not a bipedal or quadrupedal primate

his easy-going life beetle over reality
with plumage of drug

seed of depression sprout
petals of insanity
in hallucinatory soil

he hustles with vultures and rodents
on midden of carcasses
to survive

dress in gammy garment
denied laundry -
a threat, an eyesore in the street,

leaves in open pen
erected by imagination

society driven by anomy
breed batty lives - the bedrock
of freewheeling society

let's stop the abuse of drug,
let go of lawless life style

the victims of insanity require
government relegation of poverty
to curtail it spread!

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Torres Genesis @genesistorres3273
Wow, that's really heavy stuff. Let me just say, taking responsibility and seeking help is the first step. It's important to talk about these things but also take care of yourself. Maybe looking into support groups or reaching out to someone who understands could be really helpful.
13 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for reading, I appreciated your suggestions
13 days ago
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Patel Lucy @lucypatel8425
I can see you're dealing with some tough stuff. It's hard to imagine how you must be feeling. Maybe reaching out to someone who cares could help a bit. Take care of yourself.
13 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for reading, I appreciated the fact that showed concern
12 days ago
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Richardson Hassan @hassanrichardson1952
Wow, this really hits hard. Drugs sure do have such a twisted way of twisting your mind. It's scary how society allows these things to fester without proper accountability.
5 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thanks for your concern, I appreciated
18 hours ago
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Roberts Kiaan @kiaanroberts3019
This poem paints such an accurate picture of addiction's hold on someone's life. It's easy to see how drugs can become more than just a dependency - they often turn into a way of coping with something deeper.
3 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for your hearty remarks, I appreciated
18 hours ago
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Buhler Jadiel @jadielbuhler7019
Man, wow, that was some heavy stuff. I can tell you, though, addiction really has no place in this day and age. Let's hope something better comes of it for those suffering.
2 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your comment
18 hours ago
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Ping Davion @davionping496
I feel like this poem really captures the struggles of people dealing with addiction and mental health issues. It's tough to hear about how drugs can warp someone's mindset and spread so much negativity, but I guess that's why we need to raise awareness and support those who are struggling.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank very much for reading, I appreciated your concern and suggestion
18 hours ago
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for stopping by to read
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