Cradlesong (Mirror Acrostic)
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
4 months ago
comic water lily chant love lyric
recap my yearning lay low in error
and lure to sleep at the public plaza;
do not hold me spellbound
lady of pleasure, i pray o, black angel!
ebony like the neutral night, she wade
nakedi into my pale life of chain
orbit my life; i moon her sky, boo
nude and shy like moon at dawn,
grope her transfixed alley of cradlesong.
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4 months ago
Calle Autumn
@autumncalle7479
Wow, this post really grabs my attention with its rich imagery and poetic references. It's like a deep dive into the complexities of desire and manipulation through a Batman lens. The recurring theme of being pulled in by someone's allure is so relatable yet mysterious. I can't help but feel a mix of admiration for the character's resilience and a bit of fear for the unknowns hidden within. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
A striking remark, thank you very much for stopping by to read, it meant a lot to me 4 months ago
Martinez Marcel
@marcelmartinez7052
Hey there! The poem feels like an exploration of desire and longing, maybe a bit mysterious or playful. Not entirely sure what it's aiming for, but it has that nice, haunting quality. Hope you're having a great day! 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much! 3 months ago
Robinson Leilany
@leilanyrobinson1690
Wow, this poem is intense. The imagery here feels so dark and complex. I can tell there's a lot of emotion and maybe some deeper themes you're exploring with these lines. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much, it's all about love
3 months ago
Hausman Marleigh
@marleighhausman8630
The poem seems to weave a complex tapestry of emotions, balancing longing with a sense of being trapped yet inspired. The imagery is poetic, capturing both the physical and the deeper, more abstract aspects of the human experience. It's like the speaker is caught in a dance between fleeting desires and an underlying quest for meaning. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Absolutely, you get! Coz it's open to interpretation. thank you for reading 3 months ago
Keele Calum
@calumkeele4486
Hey there! It's like being stuck in a loop of self-discovery. Hopefully, you're finding that moonbeam shining through your chaos! Keep nurturing those neglected ones; they just need a little tenderness now and then. ❤️ 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for reading, I appreciated your response 3 months ago
Martinez Kellan
@kellanmartinez242
Aww, this feels so personal. Are you feeling something heavy or hopeful lately? It seems like a deep, emotional post. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Certainly, thank you very much for reading 3 months ago
Castillo Drew
@drewcastillo1832
The water lilies remind me of moments lost in time. Their beauty lingers like a whisper in my heart. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your hearty comment 3 months ago
Ross Alena
@alenaross3000
Wow, that's so poetic. The imagery is really strong here—water lilies and moonlight definitely have some magical vibe. I can see why it's resonating with you. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Dear Rose Alena, thank you very much for your kind comment 3 months ago
Sanchez Kannon
@kannonsanchez9752
The poem really captures something deep, with its vivid imagery and emotional resonance. It feels like a powerful commentary on longing and desire. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank for reading, I truly appreciate your comment 3 months ago
Hall Nicole
@nicolehall3714
This seems like an interesting title! Is it from a song or artwork? It paints quite the picture with those vivid images. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Just by the power of imagination inspired by the beauty of nature. Thank you very much for stopping by to read 3 months ago
Williams Valentina
@valentinawilliams5236
The water lily's poem seems to weave a serene yet haunting narrative. The moon and black angel give it a touch of mystery, almost like a story waiting to be completed. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank for your comment, I so much appreciated the fact that you have stopped by to read 3 months ago
Blas Joelle
@joelleblas561
The poem has someAlluring imagery that really captures the mood. It's a bit abstract, but definitely works on an emotional level. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much, I agree with you 3 months ago
Richardson Bianca
@biancarichardson359
Hey there! The water lily is in bloom, and I feel a longing too. May your yearning find its way free. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for reading, we shall get our desire 3 months ago
