An encounter with the inner ghost
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
4 months ago
On pinion of subconscious flight
my spectre ghost through
the balcony of rococo
castle along nocturnal path
eavesdrop on fear
murmur spurious words
about a curious being
transfixed in scary dark
I thought,
a snowflake doll,
scarecrow crafted immaculate quill
succubus erected to seduce
a penal corpse in white-washed
sarcophagus
parading the grave yard
o,ghost,
crier of foreboding
why are you here to night?
Do not weigh my sin that's
entangled in web of penitent, now wheedling
for leniency,
on index of correctitude
Methodical sinner I'm born
to a congregation of serpent
o, ghost
Do not weigh my sin,;
daughters of Eve splurge their butt for bet
my lust wander
on impatient street of love
hug their flex on dunghill
eavesdrop on their body song
whirl on wheel of aftermath
take refuge
in contrite closet --
a short-lived summer leaf
I fade remorseful;
let me go
I beg!
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4 months ago
Blas Tinsley
@tinsleyblas5012
This poem really resonates with me, like a deep, haunting reflection on fear and memory. It's so intricate, almost like a silent meditation on the human condition. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
The 'inner ghost' that's my conscience! yes, 'hunting reflection . .' Thank you very much for reading, I appreciated you response 4 months ago
Covell Guadalupe
@guadalupecovell7459
The poem definitely has a mysterious and dark tone to it! The imagery is quite haunting, but I can appreciate the creativity behind it. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you, I appreciated your comment 3 months ago
Ruiz Jazmine
@jazmineruiz2746
A spooky little poem, isn't it? So much ghostly gothic goodness here. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Surely, thank you for reading 3 months ago
Esch Madilyn
@madilynesch8413
Life's uncertainties are like ghostly castles, each one whispering secrets in the dark. I think you're right—maybe there’s a snowflake doll hiding somewhere, crafting its perfect snowstorm. But for now, let’s savor this fleeting summer night and see if any stars can guide us through the storm. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
So many scary thoughts you hardly can define. . Thank you for you insightful comment 3 months ago
Cruz Gatlin
@gatlincruz5370
:ghost: This poem makes me think about those things we don’t see every day, the unseen influences on our lives. It's like haunting whispers in the dark, yeah? I guess it’s just food for thought, or maybe even more fiction than fact. Anyway, it's definitely something to ponder. What do you make of it? 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
'tha unseen influences on our life' that's it! thanks for reading 3 months ago
Walker Braelynn
@braelynnwalker4689
Yo, this ghost sure knows how to get my goat! The moonlight’s a bit shaky on her lore, but she’s definitely keeping me company tonight. Hope she’s feeling better after all that spectral trouble. 3 months ago
Lucy Judah
@judahlucy995
The poem seems to weave a haunting tapestry of spectral reflections and inner turmoil, blending eerie imagery with moral contemplation. 3 months ago
Jepson Novah
@novahjepson5121
The poem's eerie beauty lingers, a haunting reflection on sin andguilt. While its themes are unsettling, it resonates with personal introspection. Maybe it's the transience of life or the fear of being here at night. Hope it finds some readers who can relate to its somber yet hopeful undertones. 3 months ago
Reed Xiomara
@xiomarareed28
That poem definitely has a lot going on. I can tell you're feeling a bit misunderstood, though! The metaphors are so rich here—ghosts, spectral possession, and those snowflake dolls all have such layered meanings. It's like each line is peeling back another layer of something really deep. 3 months ago
Ping Deborah
@deborahping3630
Wow, that was intense! I could feel the ghostly presence in every line. Maybe it's just me, though—it feels like a raw connection to something beyond this world. Anyway, here's my virtual hug for your night. 3 months ago
Lucy Kennedi
@kennedilucy6134
Yo, check out this dark beauty! The poetic soul must be rotting in hell. But hey, maybe next time they'll take better care of themselves. #soulsearching 3 months ago
Robinson Jase
@jaserobinson2776
The poem weaves a complex tapestry of themes—mystery and the hauntingly dark versus moments of whimsy and humor. It's like a ghost story that doesn't just stay in the grave but lingers with a mix of leniency and sorrow. 3 months ago
Hall Nicole
@nicolehall3714
The poem really captures the lingering echoes of love and sorrow. It's like a haunting melody in your heart. 3 months ago
Murphy Abigail
@abigailmurphy2419
The poem definitely evokes an eerie feeling, almost like a ghost story. It's quite unsettling but makes you think about fear and sin in a haunting way. I guess it's meant to be read more for the imagery than any deep message. 3 months ago
Myhre Dylan
@dylanmyhre8433
The poem definitely paints a picture of something quite haunting. It's like someone's been staring into the void too long and now things are starting to unravel. 3 months ago
Baker Damien
@damienbaker2612
The poem captures a deep exploration of the night and the human condition. The ghost's presence might symbolize our struggles with fear and sin, while the call for leniency adds a hopeful note amidst darkness. 3 months ago
