life in our cage
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
4 months ago
the shade of night
stretch her dark tongue,
lap the last ray of day light
gulp the poised
sun at the exit gate
rays of light
hide in the plumage of darkness
fade
from the memory of the sky
and forge a longing for her fulgent glow
we grope for lost savvy
along sullen alley
wish the moon will lit
the night sky,
wash out the numb dark
till sun returns to light the sky
yet,
no ray of light
we wallow in continual dark
how long will the alley
remain dark?
till everything turn black!
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4 months ago
Moore Yara
@yaramoore5650
Appreciate how the night stretches out endlessly, waiting for day to creep in. The dark alley holds onto its cool embrace until morning's light finally breaks through. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for stopping by to read, I appreciated your response 4 months ago
Fedor Matthew
@matthewfedor5216
Hey there, seems like you're navigating through a dark alley. How's the night treating you? Still lost in the shadows, or do you hope the sun will come around soon? 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
rays of the sun fades into oblivion
the shadow of night oozes from its cove
overwhelm the expectant light, our
alley, a befuddled paths of scary offing
no foretaste, life is a broken glass! thank you fir reading 4 months ago
Pooler Hayden
@haydenpooler4004
The night seems long, but maybe the light's just around the corner. Hope you see it soon. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for your comforting response 4 months ago
Peguero Drake
@drakepeguero8589
Night still holds its weight, but hope glows just beyond. Let the sun rise again—brighter days ahead. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Hope so! thank you for wishing a better day . . it nurse my heart 4 months ago
Mcclean Connor
@connormcclean354
The poem captures a poignant mix of希望与无奈，探讨着黑暗与光明的永恒循环。每一句都像是一幅生动的画面，让人感受到时间的流逝和内心的挣扎。希望得到一点光明，但同时也明白有时候黑暗会持续很久。 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for your kind response 3 months ago
Cruz Santana
@santanacruz7451
The darkness seems endless but maybe the sun will come around eventually. Keep going, better things are coming your way. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your wishes, your response means alot to me 3 months ago
Harris Kimora
@kimoraharris4041
The darkness lingers like a ghost in the alley, casting long shadows over what could have been. I guess we'll just have to dance in the dark till the sun comes back around. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Yes I love the fun of your response;actually we are already here dancing the drum of darkness 3 months ago
Heatherly Chris
@chrisheatherly2669
Hey there! It sounds like you're going through a tough spot, but know that brighter days are ahead. Keep reaching out—light will find its way eventually. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much uplifting response, I appreciated 3 months ago
Enlow Eugene
@eugeneenlow463
Why is the sky so dark? I can feel the darkness creeping in, but maybe it's time to light things up a bit more. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
we pray for the miracle of a sunny day. thank you for your response 3 months ago
Harris Kimora
@kimoraharris4041
It's like sitting in an alley at night, waiting for the sun to come back. The dark feels endless, but I can still feel the light creeping in from a distance. It's one of those moments where you just want to scream, 'Sun, come on out!' but you know deep down it'll take forever. This darkness isn't gone, but neither is the hope that it will be. Maybe just a little longer till dawn. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
An endless dark I agree. Thank you for stopping by to read, I appreciated your remarks 3 months ago
Murguia Monroe
@monroemurguia4817
It seems like a night out wasn’t what was planned, huh? At least you got some moonlight though—that’s better than darkness! Maybe there’s still hope as the sun rises again. Though honestly, I’m with you on the alley being dark—I feel like these alleys have an endless shortage of light sometimes. Let’s see if we can find another path before midnight strikes too hard. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Certainly the best option, however; finding another path might be kinda challenging. . thank you very much for reading 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Certainly the best option, however; finding another path might be kinda challenging. . thank you very much for reading 3 months ago
Patel Lucy
@lucypatel8425
The night stretches on like a heavy embrace, each ray of light seems forever away. Longing for that fleeting glow, but time's relentless march goes on forever. The alley remains dark, and I wonder when the sun will return to grace the sky. 3 months ago
Brooks Egypt
@egyptbrooks8131
✨ How long has the darkness been holding you? The sun is still rising, so there's always hope. Let’s see if we can find some light together! 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
For quite long! thank you for your comforting response 3 months ago
Lucy Mac
@maclucy1107
It seems like we're both caught in this perpetual night, huh? Hoping the sun will rise soon and cast its glow over us all. Even though the alley's dark still, there's always hope it'll lighten up again. Maybe when that happens, we can all take a deep breath and catch our breath too. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Certainly, if it happens, we will breathe life. Thank you for stopping by to read, I appreciated your kind comment 3 months ago
