Woman in my mirror
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
28 days ago
sit at the threshold
of good looking
flex your glamour;
be warn
the cancaworm
of wantoness eats the
flame of show door
and permit bugs into the room
sag at the door sill
of pale look
perfect your kind act, align
your look with
moral correctitude;
do not mourn
a crust in one's eye
is a diadem in another
i hate,
i despise a rosy cheek
don't value starry eyes
in anger with coral
figure that lacks
flare to kindle
her ember
a kind heart,
loyal and virtuous
with her i share my nest!
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Blas Hana
@hanablas8285
After reading this, I feel more confident about how I present myself. It's all about inner strength! 12 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you! I am happy to know that there are still humble people out there with good heart . . my regards 12 days ago
Blas Tinsley
@tinsleyblas5012
Goddess of grace, you've adorned me with wit and virtue! Your moral acts elevate my soul. Embrace your correctitude; it's a beacon against wantonness. Be bold in your beauty, for those who judge by the pale look shall find naught. A kind heart, loyal, and virtuous – together we build our nest with grace. 8 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for your hearty remarks, it means a lot to me 7 days ago
Feathers Janiyah
@janiyahfeathers4328
You know you were bold enough to sit at the threshold of good looking, but I wonder if that's overdoing the glamour. Maybe a little humor would help balance things out. 8 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for stopping by to read , i appreciated your response 7 days ago
Blas Hana
@hanablas8285
Yo, that's a bold take on looking good while staying true to yourself. The struggle between wantingoness and moral correctness is relatable, but it's always nice when someone steps into the fire confidently. 5 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for stopping by to read, it gladden my heart 5 days ago
