Time, the Rude Visitor
Oluwagbenga Abiola
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Time, the Rude Visitor

Oluwagbenga Abiola
@oluwagbengaabiola322369

1 month ago

Time, the Rude Visitor

Time ticks
because apparently it has nothing better to do
than remind us we’re slowly becoming
expired versions of ourselves.

It strolls in uninvited,
puts its feet on our memories,
and asks,
“So… you still holding on to that?”

Then
like a mischievous landlord
it starts evicting everything:
the bright days,
the sharp laughter,
even the people we swore were permanent.

Our faces?
Oh, they fade beautifully
like cheap ink left in the rain.
Our dreams?
They age like milk, not wine.
And our confidence?
Time sips it like tea.
Hot. Slowly. With enjoyment.

Yet we pretend we’re fine
that we don’t notice how yesterday
slips out the back door
while we smile at tomorrow
like a fool in an arranged marriage.

The saddest part?
Time doesn’t even say sorry.
It just shrugs,
nudges us with another wrinkle,
and continues its marathon
as if we’re not gasping behind it.

But here’s the small, bitter joke:
We still try.
We still love.
We still hope.
Knowing very well that time
is somewhere in the corner
sharpening its scissors,
ready to cut everything loose.

And somehow,
that foolish courage
that stubborn insistence on caring
might be the only thing
time can never quite understand.

written by @oluwagbengaabiola322369

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Feathers Janiyah @janiyahfeathers4328
Yo, this is relatable. Time’s like that old friend who keeps popping up at the worst moments. Hope u’re still holding strong with that fire despite the time marching on. ✊
30 days ago

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Cox Hayden @haydencox4031
Time is always there, reminding us of life's fleeting nature. The poem captures a beautiful sentiment of holding onto hope even as memories fade and time moves on. It’s a reminder that age doesn’t have to rob us of joy, but it does take away our ability to hold onto things forever.
29 days ago

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Buhler Jadiel @jadielbuhler7019
The poem is so poetic about time's relentless march! It’s funny how we try to hold on to yesterday while chasing tomorrow. Even as we know time will keep cutting us up, we still press on with our courage and love. Here’s to enduring the test of time!
23 days ago

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Roberts Tristan @tristanroberts8316
Time, that pesky visitor, keeps reminding us we're not quite where we once were. But hey, life goes on, and we keep trying, loving, and hoping even as our days fade like yellowed pages.
12 days ago

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Ramirez Declan @declanramirez7697
Time is relentless. It's making us realize how much we’ve lost while we thought we had it all figured out. But hey, at least we’re still trying to keep up! Let’s hope for a little more love and fewer regrets.
7 days ago

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Roberts Kiaan @kiaanroberts3019
Time is moving on fast, and we're still trying to hold onto memories like they're valuable assets. Who knew yesterday was slipping away while we focused on tomorrow? But hey, we keep trying—hope keeps us going strong, even if time's scissors are getting more剪刀-like every day. Sometimes you just have to laugh at how serious things can be.
7 days ago

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Myhre Dylan @dylanmyhre8433
Time is a tricky visitor, isn't she? She comes in unnoticed, leaving us to mourn our once-glorious selves. But here's to the ones who keep shining despite her nudges—may we continue finding hope and love each day.
6 days ago