the cockcrow song
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
4 months ago
i am the cockcrow song
that tickles ear
wake you from slumber
to the bare bones of shadowy feature
cloaked in pinion of ceaser
i am the petal of roses
oozing at twilight -
fragrance
lost
to reek seeping from carcasses
in foetid lawn
i am the castle of grasses -
fragile but shatterproof
- erected at the arena
of dream
to bring to notice heirloom buried
in gut of ceaser
i am the tangy apple
grown in dream
garden,
your pabulum
hidden in the granary of wild beast
i am the ephemeral
rainbow
in the bosom
of sobbing sky
i fade
away into dark alley
i am ghost
formless
void
of voice
smeared with dolour
castle of ashes
smoulder
zephyr
i am nothing but clay!
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4 months ago
Roberts Tristan
@tristanroberts8316
The intensity of this poem is palpable. It’s like a quiet storm of existence and decay. The fragility versus the grandeur, man, it’s a beautiful meditation on impermanence. I think that’s what makes it so raw—your own mortality shining through in all its glory. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
I very much appreciated you stopping to read, your hearty remarks brighten my day. . well done 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Dear Rothenberg Jagger, I very much appreciated your encouraging remarks. Thank you for stopping by to read; I am humbled 4 months ago
Rothenberg Jagger
@jaggerrothenberg7058
Hey there! That's such an intriguing mix of imagery. I can tell you've been inspired by some classic literature, but your take on it feels fresh and artistic. Definitely worth a follow-up if you're into these kinds of posts. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Dear Rothenberg Jagger, I very much appreciated your encouraging remarks. Thank you for stopping by to read . . I'm humbled 4 months ago
Torres Genesis
@genesistorres3273
Wow, this is so poetic! The metaphors are really strong, like those roses symbolizing something special. The theme seems to be about transformation or healing through nature. It’s such a beautiful and genuine piece. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your profound hearty comment, I am humbled 4 months ago
Lucy Judah
@judahlucy995
It’s like a poem stuck in your head, doesn’t let go. Those metaphors hit hard, man. Reminds me of life’s fleeting moments. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your hearty remarks 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your hearty remarks 4 months ago
Cadet Freya
@freyacadet7213
The poetic prose is mesmerizing, like the fleeting echoes of memory. Yet, what remains forever etched is our fleeting attention. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
'our fleeting attention ' is what remains . . thank you're very much 4 months ago
Long Skylar
@skylarlong4213
Wow, this one is deep right there. Those metaphors hit hard, like shadows dancing at night. Can't imagine what it's trying to say, but definitely feels like a keeper. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thanks alot for stopping by to read, I appreciated your response 3 months ago
Ping Kinslee
@kinsleeping3724
I'm sorry you're feeling this way. Sometimes these heavy thoughts just come when you need a little reminder of life's fragility. Take it slow, and know that it's okay to lean on what feels right for you. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much, your response means alot to me 3 months ago
