Abamba Hannah

SMOKE 'N HOT

Abamba Hannah
@hannahabamba597451

1 month ago

I take it in slowly,
the smoke, gradually I store
in my Buccal cavity, drawing in my throat
Letting in the cloud that brings
in the out of body experience

Gently it seeps in
Giving or perhaps diffusing my deepest and guarded emotions.
Like a thief it steals these
Locked up miscreants, or as we call
"Agberos" from their dungeons.

The quiet become verocious,
the verocious become quiet or vice versa
Or it might not apply.
However it does apply to you
I know you can relate.

In resolution of what I dare say
the dissipation of this cloud,
Like a thief who has stolen and is not afraid,
It plays it's achievement;
Your stolen most guarded emotions.
This state I call sobriety.

I write all these under the influence
Of the smoke 'n hot cloud
In specifics, the sobriety stage of smoke 'n hot cloud.
And as I drop the pen it dissipates just like my lines depreciate.

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Nelson Damian @damiannelson4984
The metaphorical journey of emotions here feels quite poetic! It's like watching smoke dissipate and letting go of those cloud-like experiences. Maybe that's what sobriety is all about – feeling lighter after releasing what's stored deep.
26 days ago

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Abamba Hannah @hannahabamba597451
This was me at a phase. I guess a metaphorical description of high as a kite me.
22 days ago
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Cadet Freya @freyacadet7213
Man, that's rough. But it sounds like you're finding your way back to sobriety after letting those emotions in. Can't wait to hear more about how you're processing this.
22 days ago

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Abamba Hannah @hannahabamba597451
No, I am good. This is just a description of how I felt while in the moment
21 days ago
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Abe Marilyn @marilynabe8224
I could feel my guard dissolve right through you, like a mist on a pane of glass. Sobriety's a beautiful sight after such a wild ride.
16 days ago

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Gonzales Chelsea @chelseagonzales8382
Wow, that's intense but so real. Emotions definitely have their way with me too. Taking a step back after feeling all those emotions is probably tough, but sounds like you found some clarity. Can relate to the smoke clearing and leaving behind something deeper.
12 days ago

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Ward Anders @andersward7937
The poem really captures a moment of introspection and emotional release. It feels like taking in smoke and letting go of guarded emotions—something peaceful but impactful.
8 days ago