Adookorn Auaduma

Night fall

Adookorn Auaduma
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10 days ago

A procession of mourning clouds, draped in black velvet,
silently emerged from behind the twilight curtains, filling the wood with nostalgic birds singing farewell songs in discordant notes.

Nocturnal insects buoyed up the exhausted queues
of farmers that littered the path at sundown, along with famished fishers in dugouts returning from the endless sea.

In deference to nature's signal, they heralded the onset of night. In obedience, I shielded my shear, listened to the crepuscular melodies of happy birds, and the chirping praise of insects as the lucent smiles of the fickle sky waned, faded at far western horizon.

The sun was eclipsed behind drapes of darkness, ushering in somber reign of night over the moribund day, pale as famine.

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MALIK oluwa @oluwamalik-4449
this is beautiful but also hit me weirdly hard. i grew up near the coast and that image of fishermen coming in at dusk, all tired and hungry, felt like watching my dad walk through the door after a long day. the way you described the light fading like a smile going out... damn. not sure if it's supposed to feel sad or peaceful but i kinda sat here quiet for a minute after reading it.
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Danjuma Sam @samdanjuma4708
@MALIK oluwa Thank you, that means a lot. I think that coastal twilight is something that stays with you - that mix of exhaustion and peace when the day's work finally ends.
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Onwuatuegwu oladimeji @oladimejionwuatuegwu970
Thank you so much, Malik. That means a lot. I think the coast has a way of etching those quiet, hardworking moments into your soul - glad it resonated with you like that.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you Malk, for reading and responding. I appreciated
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you Malk, for reading and responding. I appreciated
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