THE WHISPERS OF MY INNER CHILD
Amarachi  Anastasia  Okoro
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THE WHISPERS OF MY INNER CHILD

Amarachi Anastasia Okoro
@amarachiokoro

15 days ago

Ohh!! my wistful memoir,
I miss dawn we bath outside
in our mother's big basin
Splashing foaming water to make bubbles
as we laugh sheepishly,
shining our missing front tooth
School was our spot; to prank pals April fool…
And share five kobo sweets with dirty hands

The bell calls for games under the jealous sun
Boys played football with empty can,
Girls picked Súwell, claped Ügaa with besties
Toddlers did hide and seek with water gun
The joy that bloom our bond echoes from the school walls

I miss the noon we plunk unripe Oranges
and Mangoes from unknown paradise
Hiding our crime under our big polo
Then, our prom union came with the rain;
As we face heavens with wide jaws
for drops of blessings

Our weekend homework is for unfinished gossip,
And our saliva served as superglue
Ripping the middle of our notebook for
sheet-ships
UP NEPA!!!, we scream,
dismissed to watch our favorite cartoon.

I miss the dusk, that opens our streetlight -
to kill loneliness with our playtime
The sound of crickets enjoin us
into our ancestral game;
“Kpakpangölò kpakpangölò úgene”
Chasing one another in circle
under the garment of the moonlit.

Yes!, xmas season mark my best layoff
Time we lit knock-out, blow balloon, and beg money
As we parade our oversized outfit like freeing beings
Lauding to eat chicken legs and wings
Till the day adulthood caught up on us.

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Native language (their meaning & representation )

* Súwell - a game played by jumping drawn square (house) on the bare ground.
* Ügaa - a femininely Igbo game played by clapping hands and moving legs in guessing.
* Kpakpangölò kpakpangölò úgene - An old Igbo traditional practice/ games played at night chasing one with stick.


SHORT DESCRIPTION:
One fundamental thing that inspired this poem is the display my playfulness and authenticity, which often trigger my childhood memories. When I was lad, i lived a free life in my natural state and grew in light to be true to myself (even it means to be different). Another fundamental factor that inspired by poem are friends and siblings. Spending time with them reminds me how time flies while our memory hang in the balance, feeling like nothing has change. Their innocence is still written in their smile and their laughter brings back my nostalgia.


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moses David @davidmoses055608
lovely moments painted
15 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much dear
14 days ago
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UDEME ABBA @udemeabba089100
It's reminds me of my childhood
14 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
I glad you see your reflection in this poem. Thank you for reading
14 days ago
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Becky Oludayo Peleowo @beckyoludayoadenuga426965
What beautiful imagery. Lovely memories. You can try to reduce some of the very long lines.
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much Becky. i really appreciate it. I will take your correction
6 days ago
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Akam Divinefavour @divinefavourakam300040
I always come to this platform to read your poems cos they are so unique and interesting this is a masterpiece
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
awwwn. thank you so much.
6 days ago
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Akam Divinefavour @divinefavourakam300040
I always come to this platform to read your poems cos they are so unique and interesting this is a masterpiece
6 days ago

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Favour Samuel @favoursamuel013556
You captured the tiniest moments. I can so much relate to those lovely memories. KUDOS
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much favour I’m grateful
6 days ago
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Benita ozoffor @benitaozoffor
nice poem your poem created an imagination in my head I can relate. you write beautifully
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much dear
6 days ago
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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much dear
6 days ago
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Benita ozoffor @benitaozoffor
nice poem your poem created an imagination in my head I can relate. you write beautifully
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much
4 days ago
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Maryjane Okwuibe @maryjaneokwuibe411637
I love that part/ line that says “up nepa” I did it. I love your poem. I read it again and again
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
I am happy to relate. thank you so much for reading
6 days ago
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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
I am happy to relate. thank you so much for reading
6 days ago
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Amarachi Bekee @amarachibekee146590
always the best at what you do, Amar this is one outstanding poem I've read here.
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
woow. thanks for the compliment
4 days ago
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ugwu precious @ugwuprecious856265
I felt the wave of nostalgia after read your poem It's so nice full of light
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
awwwwn. thank you Presh for reading
4 days ago
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Odogwu Imma @odogwuimma
nice one Same I love this
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you for reading
4 days ago
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Godson Nwachukwu @godsonokoro
see how you created magic and call it a poem I felt alive after reading this beautiful poem You rock sis
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much dear. I appreciate your words
4 days ago
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Jen Okonkwo @jenokonkwo
well knitted I love the voice you gave your poem
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much It's the voice of my childhood
4 days ago
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Florence chidimma @florencechidimma387785
Amyyy I'm your number fan when it comes to poetry your poem flows from you. I can relate with it
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
ahh!! thank you Florence
4 days ago
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Florence chidimma @florencechidimma387785
your poem brought back my childhood memories with smiles
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
I'm glad it did. thank you for reading through
4 days ago
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Josephine Ekawu @josephineekawu689669
“lauding to eat children legs and wings” is my line I did it I even fight for it Your poem is funny and interesting keep it up Amar
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
I laugh oooo I'm happy you can relate to that part. thanks for reading
4 days ago
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Josephine Ekawu @josephineekawu689669
“lauding to eat children legs and wings” is my line I did it I even fight for it Your poem is funny and interesting keep it up Amar
6 days ago

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Okoro Onyinye @okoroonyinye
I admire you greatly your uniqueness in your poetry
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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
awwwwwn. see compliment. I'm holding on to that thank you so much
4 days ago
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Okoro Onyinye @okoroonyinye
this poem is perfect I love this. you arranged your point systematically in stanza, painting a good image in the mind of the readers
6 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you for your review. I appreciate it
4 days ago
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lovely Nwafor @lovelynwafor546796
a beautiful poem that paints a good childhood experiences. kudos
4 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much for reading lovely
4 days ago
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Ebube Cajetan @ebubecajetan278007
nice poem with words that are captivating
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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much
3 days ago
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Proper Jude @properjude231327
nice one your poem is an interesting one
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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you
3 days ago
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Miracle Nwolisa @miraclenwaolisa051208
woow what a fascinating poem! I love it
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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so much
3 days ago
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carls Franks @carlsfranks039839
interesting I must say Your poem reflects
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carls Franks @carlsfranks039839
interesting I must say Your poem echoes
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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thanks frank
3 days ago
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Charles Hycienth @charleshycienth837015
Amar this is great poem so refreshing that it bring back memories alive
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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you so for reading and sharing your thoughts
3 days ago
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chioma Ocha @chiomaocha226601
a lovely poem to read and remember
4 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you chioma
3 days ago
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Immanuel Timothy @immanueltimothy939365
this is good
4 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you dear
3 days ago
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eberechukwu Okoro @eberechukwuokoro
Yes ooo Me i begged for money during my own turn I went around with printed card for people to mark I love your poem sis I can relate
4 days ago

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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
hahaaa i understand that scenario Thank you for reading
3 days ago
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eberechukwu Okoro @eberechukwuokoro
Yes ooo Me i begged for money during my own turn I went around with printed card for people to mark I love your poem sis I can relate
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Destiny Joseph @josephdestiny597391
"I miss dawn we bath outside in mother's basin" ❤️
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Amarachi Anastasia Okoro @amarachiokoro
thank you Joseph for reading
2 days ago