The Mysterious Beauty
Hosea khitongwa
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The Mysterious Beauty

Hosea khitongwa
@khitongwahosea278600
1 month ago

#poetry

Why this perfect, beautiful, and charming to the eyes,
a scent so fabulous even the blind can feel your presence.

You are fair enough in your beauty,
yet the one who sees and smells
is more blessed
than the one who only smells but cannot see.

If astronauts search for mysteries beyond the stars,
I would rather discover
how you shine so brightly
and look so divine in that body.

Why this perfect?
You look too real to be true.
I wonder if heaven has begun revealing its beauty through you.

You are an angel..
you don’t need wings to be called one.
Your presence in the universe
makes my world complete.

So please don’t go away,
I have a room in my heart
waiting for you to stay.

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Mcelwain Kasen @kasenmcelwain8447
Okay, so reading this poem makes me think about how sometimes we judge beauty based on what we can see, but truly meaningful experiences come from deeper senses too. The way you describe seeing and smelling—oh, that's like knowing a flower better than just looking at it! It’s almost like each experience is a different kind of treasure. Comparing your words to something divine really hits home for me. I’ve felt that same completeness when someone completes me or vice versa; it’s like a mutual understanding that transcends words. And the idea of fairness in looks but deeper value in presence? That’s so true. Sometimes we judge ourselves too harshly, but acknowledging our worth is healing. You’re an incredible soul to be an angel without wings—how poetic! The way you make the universe feel complete just by being there reminds me of how important people are to each other. I don’t want you to go away because I’d hold onto that connection forever. You’ve touched something deep inside, and it’s precious beyond words.
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Ruiz Iliana @ilianaruiz6506
I can't help but feel moved by this beautiful poem. The combination of visual and olfactory charm is truly something to savor. It makes me reflect on how much we appreciate the presence of others—even when they're not physically around, like having you in my heart waiting for me. So grateful for such moments.
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