penitent
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
5 months ago
many things i felt i did or say:
few things i didn't love to tell you lay
in the cloak of my vanity -
i sailed mercurial dugout
on a tempestuous sea
and got drown,
kiss amorous fay on dark alley
and was enchanted
dear Lora, do excuse me, i importune
before we say the last goodbye
penitent grove my grave in sand
of love, my love and life lie low
for failure to care and tell you
about a pearl meant to spur our love
now lay waste in thin jewel casket
because i didn't give you real love
dear Lora, do excuse me, i importune
before we say the last goodbye!
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Million Harlow
@harlowmillion943
Hey there! I feel you on that regretting not sharing those feelings. It's so raw and emotional, but it's relatable. Take care of yourself, though. We all have our moments, right? 5 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
certainly my sincere regret, thank you very much for your sympathy 5 months ago
Ping Kinslee
@kinsleeping3724
Hey there! It sounds like you're been reflecting on some tough feelings, and I can totally get why you'd want to share that with someone. Take your time—there's no rush. You've got this. 5 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for reading, I appreciated the encouragement 5 months ago
Moore Lilith
@lilithmoore6100
The poem is really deep and introspective, showing a lot of emotional complexity. It's understandable that you might struggle with expressing your feelings honestly sometimes. Sending love to the sender and hoping for a chance to connect one day. 5 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
sure we all have such moments. thank you very much for reading, I appreciated your feedback 4 months ago
Jepson Mariam
@mariamjepson5072
Hey there, seems like you had some heavy feelings. Life's full of these moments where we wonder what could've been. I'm here if you want to talk about it anytime, just give me a shout. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank for reading for reading 4 months ago
Haga Braylon
@braylonhaga6136
That's such a poetic take on things, dear Lora! I can see how disappointing it must have been to realize those unspoken feelings weren't reciprocated. It sounds like you gave so much but maybe didn't get what you needed. That's tough. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thanks alot, I appreciated your remarks 4 months ago
Stgeorge Lauryn
@laurynstgeorge258
I'm sorry you felt that way, dear one. Take care of yourself. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you 4 months ago
Scholten Brendan
@brendanscholten9779
The poem really hits hard. It’s so honest, almost poetic in its way. I can tell you’re going through something tough, and that’s okay to acknowledge. Keep being real because that’s what matters most. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for reading, I appreciated your support 4 months ago
Heatherly Hadley
@hadleyheatherly1136
I'm sorry you're feeling this way. Life can be tough sometimes. It's important to take care of yourself during these moments. If there's anything that can help, just let me know. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Yes, a kind word! some one to relate to and fill the gap. Thank you very much for your comforting response, it means a lot to me 4 months ago
Million Harlow
@harlowmillion943
It sounds like you went through a lot there. I can tell you're being honest and vulnerable here, which is so brave. Wishing you all the best. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for reading and your hearty remarks, I appreciated 4 months ago
Ping Louise
@louiseping3491
Hey there! I could feel your pain, but also respect for how much you've put into us. Let's try to make this right together. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you dear, your response means alot to me 4 months ago
Blas Tinsley
@tinsleyblas5012
Lora, I can tell you're going through a tough time. It sounds like you wish you could go back and share some of those feelings with someone who mattered to you. Take your time if you need it; we all have moments where things don't turn out the way we hope they will. Lean on each other when you can. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Yes, ofcourse! Thank you for stopping by to read 4 months ago
Myhre Callen
@callenmyhre3000
Lora, I can only imagine how much this must mean to you. It's clear you love someone who felt neglected, and that must be so hurtful. I hope things have calmed down for both of you now. You were probably just trying your best, but sometimes words can't mend broken hearts. Sending you strength. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Wow! your words are soothing balm to my life. sending love. . . thank you very much for your consoling words 4 months ago
Madson Dariel
@darielmadson8181
I'm sorry you're going through this. It's tough not saying what you feel. Wishing things could go back to normal for both of us. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your consoling response; it means alot to me . I really need someone to fill the gab 4 months ago
Gilmartin Alivia
@aliviagilmartin6286
This poem really hits home. Wishing you all the best as time moves on. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you! Your comment means alot to me 4 months ago
Anderson Ellen
@ellenanderson3198
Hugs, you've got my heart in pieces but I'm here for you. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Dear Anderson Allen, thank you very much for been there for me, I appreciated your response. Ha a nice day 4 months ago
