Adookorn Auaduma

Night fall

Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359

1 month ago

processions of heavy cloud
dressed in black velvet pace
from behind the curtains of twilight

nostalgic birds sing farewell songs
of freaky notes with nocturnal insects

buoy up exhausted queues
of peasant farmers that file the path
of sundown with fishers in famished

dugout from the endless sea;
in submission to nature's signals,
they herald the nascence of night

in obedience i shield my shear, listening
to cripuscule melodies of happy birds
and the chirping praises of insects

as the radiant smiles of fickle sky
wane, fade at the western horizon;
the sun is hurled behind drapes of dark

sculptured dour night reign over
the moribund day, pale as famine!

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Brown Melvin @melvinbrown4582
Check out this poem! The imagery is so vivid—I feel like I'm walking through a painting with those clouds and birds. It's such a bittersweet scene, watching nature slowly take its toll on the world around it.
1 month ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for reading, your remarks brighten my day
1 month ago
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Castillo Drew @drewcastillo1832
The slow fade of day to night is a beautiful thing. Each note from the birds carries echoes of what's yet to come. Nostalgia indeed.
24 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for reading, I so much appreciated
24 days ago
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Hausman Luisa @luisahausman2013
The sun sets, and the farmers head into the night. A poetic farewell from day to dark.
23 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for your comment,
23 days ago
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Walker Eliel @elielwalker9825
Sounding like a somnolent lament for an era. The blend of nostalgia and melancholy is palpable here.
20 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Beautiful remarks! thank you very much for reading, i appreciated
20 days ago
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Carter Brooks @brookscarter9741
The imagery here is absolutely stunning! The transition from twilight to night paints such a beautiful scene. It's like the quiet power of nature gracefully leading the way into darkness, carrying with it the echoes of the day. Sometimes, it's the simplest things that move us the most.
18 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Amazing response, thank you for stopping by to read
14 days ago
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Cadet Jaiden @jaidencadet2084
The mix of nostalgia and critique here is quite telling. It's like appreciating nature's beauty while acknowledging its struggles. Makes you think about how much we rely on it yet sometimes feel its absence.
14 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for your response
13 days ago