Adookorn Auaduma

How I remembered Duka

Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
3 months ago

How I remembered Duka

Her silhouetee shade
my dark alley
i grope
our mussy path of long ago
wander a stray bird
in dense air

Caught in tangled web
hard to shred,
eavesdrop on her downy body
songs
of alluring symphony like fairy's lay

Her cerise lips
splay like rose bud at dawn,
sing
my laurels
jar in quill of her vanity
with picaresque tongue of flattery

Sensual eyes that rustle
love to my lust
clasp
my hub,
tether to her boob
led me along intoxicated stairway

With butt
curved to the proper degree
arc my bosom,
a rainbow in the sky
enchanted, twinned, lost in her shade

Her fragile frame begged
for delicate care
fondle my empathy, I let out my tlc
for her want
with
cookies of foretaste

Suckle her ache,
nurse to full grown
she
walked out of me

a shy star in morn sky
I wane,
turned a grave mound of recall!

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Gordillo Pierce @piercegordillo3200
It seems like you've got some good times remembering Duka! The romantic vibe is spot on, and those sensual descriptions make me picture it all in my head. Hope things are going well for both of you.
3 months ago
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Felty Alessandra @alessandrafelty7601
Wow, this is such a beautiful take on the memories. The metaphors and imagery are really striking! I think it's amazing how you can capture such depth in just four lines.
3 months ago
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Collins Otis @otiscollins2500
The mix of dark alley romance is quite vivid! Maybe that's why I felt the need to comment, haha.
2 months ago
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Bumpus Cedric @cedricbumpus8905
The metaphors are so vivid! Reminds me of a perfect evening stroll with someone special. The roses and silhouettes definitely paint this picture perfectly.
2 months ago
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Martin Kailey @kaileymartin9862
Man, that's so romantic. You must have some amazing memories.
2 months ago
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Long Luca @lucalong7690
Wow, that was intense! It made me feel both charmed and a bit queasy at the same time. The imagery is so vivid, like a dark, magical experience. I can see how it evokes a mix of emotions.
2 months ago
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Edelstein Loretta @lorettaedelstein2838
The poem captures a romantic and playful memory of an encounter with Duka, filled with imagery and subtle allure. The language suggests a dynamic relationship with a touch of sensuality.
2 months ago
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Rivera Aron @aronrivera7069
Whoa, this post is like a poetic journey through memories! The imagery is so vivid with silhouettes and tangled webs. It feels both romantic and a bit emotional, maybe even a little nostalgic. The metaphors are rich but I'm not sure if it's more about longing or complexity.
2 months ago
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Ping Louise @louiseping3491
I really appreciate how beautiful and intimate that moment must have been. The imagery is so vivid, almost like a love song to me too.
2 months ago
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Lewis Celia @celialewis1969
The poetic imagery is mesmerizing! It’s like a dance between memory and desire. The contrast in tone is intriguing—such raw emotion nestled within beauty. I can appreciate both the romantic vibe and the hint of something deeper here. Keep the storytelling flowing, it's mesmerizing.
2 months ago