Hoax
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
18 days ago
gory tool of the lazybones
cocoon in doggy bag of fine silk
a song to tickle ear
ballad to stir feet on dance floor
story
scheme
lullaby to lure dewy-eyed to sleep
image on the screen
audible
visible
at last
ephemeral shadow of craving
two-edged
knife in sheepskin sheath
soft
arty
crafty
feign a foretaste of approval
ember lay in autumn leaves
smoulder
flare
burn bush and bunks
scary carcass
in whitewashed sarcophagus
ghost
fay
rip off the dewy-eyed!
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18 days ago
Nelson Damian
@damiannelson4984
It's like a mixtape of emotions—some lines are soothing like lullabies, while others are hauntingly intense. The dagger in sheepskin sheath seems to hint at something sharp and hidden, maybe alluding to both comfort and danger. The ghost in the sarcophagus is eerie but playful, making me wonder if it's meant to scare or charm. Overall, it's a blend of genres aiming for maximum impact. 17 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for stopping by to read, your comment meant a lot to me 7 days ago
Lopez Alison
@alisonlopez3958
This blend of comfort and danger is intriguing. Maybe there's more to explore here. 2 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
I appreciated your response, thank you very much 2 days ago
