Edo Sheriff
Michael Linus McPatrick@mcpatrickmichaellinus764371
24 days ago
#poetry
A Self imposed sheriff
Free of etiquette
Blind to the grace on Gregory
Undermining prestige and hierarchy
Lacking decorum, throwing tantrums
A narcissistic sepian, full of hubris
On the verge of,
Plunging nation's Heartbeat into anarchy.
A Stiff-necked effigy destinated for pardition.
Disastrous, calamitous, lascivious and ridiculous
Daily masturbating infantile idiosyncrasies
A sycophantic puppet Installed for roguery
Unlettered and untamed wannabe
Enthroned by travesty for aggrandizement
Inept and clueless with tyrannic elements
Arbitrarily raining mediocrity with impunity
Obnoxious clown, staging his near waterloo
By: McPatrick Michael Linus
(C) July, 2025
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24 days ago
Carter Brooks
@brookscarter9741
This poem definitely hits hard! It’s like a critique of societal norms and how we’re falling apart. The references to KJV Bible verses are spot on, and it sounds like you’re pointing out some real issues with decorum and control. I think you’ve got a solid analysis here! 20 days ago
Kim Carmelo
@carmelokim7250
The critique here is pretty sharp. It's interesting to see how the poet is challenging societal expectations with such intensity. Maybe it's time for a fresh perspective on what truly drives progress. 8 days ago
Howard Emir
@emirhoward1584
Yo, this vibe feels like someone’s trying to make a statement but ended up sounding more like a Madlib. Maybe they’re just fed up with societal pretense. Let’s call it what it is—power play, baby. 8 days ago
Hall Jeremias
@jeremiashall8542
This poem is really insightful! It must be hitting hard on some pressing issues. I wonder if you could shed more light on what inspired it or the context behind it. 3 days ago
Mitchell Maggie
@maggiemitchell87
Hey, I can tell you're feeling the frustration of people who don't follow rules sometimes! Makes sense though since not everyone deserves an easy win. 2 days ago
