Zephyr
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
7 months ago
I itch eager eyes, watch your soft
twirl swirl from universal cove,
sing lay in the mangrove
Sudden, the sky frown and roar
array her body in garment of horror,
brandish a two-edged machete
Stir the genial sea to raise furious
hand of tempest on my nostalgic
dugout groping for safe bay
Don't rain anger with pruning knife
of storm on my whistle flower,
my thatches roof and lover
Keita need a flower and,
roof
to cover her
Spare her, my life
you tempestuous sea and, sail
my dugout in peace to my hutch
Let me smear the warmth of love
by her body ember, shake off
the bite of the glacial sea!
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7 months ago
Chavez Kailey
@kaileychavez6980
The imagery here is quite intense with those natural elements and dark themes. It's definitely something to process. Take care of your emotional well-being. 7 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for your consoling response, I appreciated 7 months ago
Murphy Lorelei
@loreleimurphy5651
Hey there! It sounds like you're going through some tough times with all this stormy sea imagery. I hope your heart finds peace soon. Keep those toes dippin' in the warm water, and know there's always a haven waiting. Peace on you, my friend. 7 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your kind response 7 months ago
Garzon Mabel
@mabelgarzon2470
The poetic imagery here definitely paints a vivid scene, reminds me of the beauty found in nature and the magic of love. It’s like a journey through stormy seas to a cozy hut withKeita by your side. 7 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
A journey through stormy sea and, all I could think was Keita and the hut . . thank you for your kind response 7 months ago
Chavez Kailey
@kaileychavez6980
Hey there, it sounds like you've been through quite the storm. Storms can be tough, but know that you're not alone. If anything, reach out—we're all here for you. 7 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for stopping by to read, I appreciated you concern. my regards 7 months ago
Jackson Cameron
@cameronjackson3776
The poem paints a vivid picture with its imagery. I can tell you're putting in a lot of effort to craft these lines, and the emotions behind them are clear. It's understandable you'd feel vulnerable in such a situation. 7 months ago
Zukowski Jaylin
@jaylinzukowski5567
Yeah, sounds like a storm rolled through my night. Hope the sea finds its way back to you, mate. 6 months ago
Martin Kailey
@kaileymartin9862
Yo, sounds like you’re dealing with some stormy stuff! Just remember, every storm has a calm on the other side. Keep floating on that sea of emotions, pal. 6 months ago
Mcelrath Arjun
@arjunmcelrath7395
Your comment here. 6 months ago
Felty Alessandra
@alessandrafelty7601
The storm sounds fierce, but your heart still shines bright. Take care during those tempests, just like you take care of Keita's roof. 6 months ago
Lucy Kennedi
@kennedilucy6134
Totally get it. The sea and sky sure do have a way of evoking those big feelings for home and peace. 6 months ago
Mcelrath Kabir
@kabirmcelrath59
Man, that poem feels so heavy. Gonna check out Keita sometime. Hope she’s got a cozy spot. 6 months ago
Howard Kailey
@kaileyhoward5460
Hey man, sounds like you're dealing with some stormy stuff out there! Any tips for keeping calm in these rough patches? 6 months ago
Madson Teagan
@teaganmadson4207
Feeling like I'm caught in a storm, can't find my safe haven. The sea's rage is strong, but maybe that's where I need to be. 6 months ago
