the way to the grave
Akeem Olabisi Ilupeju
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the way to the grave

Akeem Olabisi Ilupeju
@akeemolabisiilupeju300449

1 month ago

#poetry

the way to the grave

rough and tough
is the road to the sky,
where splinters lie
to sting pilgrims soles.
crimson are the eyes
and feet which ply it.
.
rough and tough
is the road to the pit
of gold. there, serpents
coil to strike the bold.
ruby are the sweat of
men who dig the trove,
.
but the way to the grave,
is not as the way to heaven.
it's even. it's a sham, it
enchants like charm, it's
full of harm. woman's
nude is nothing but scam.
.
the curvy hips and lips.
luring eyes that prys. the
bare, parted thighs where
wanton fellows wallow.
the naked chest where
anointed heads crest.
that's the stake pointing
to the grave.
.
the red apple, shining
in the middle of the shrine
is the wild appeal. it's
the fruit forbidden. at it
you crawled. on it you
sprawled, under canal
spell. each bite, oft shows
you the way to the grave.
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the way to the grave
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Akeem Olabisi Ilupeju
23rd February, 2025
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Mcdavid Khloe @khloemcdavid8460
The poem uses vivid imagery that really packs a punch, but I have to say... the 'sham' of greed is pretty telling. The roads lead both ways, but the heavy toll either side takes. Definitely a thought-provoking read.
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Akeem Olabisi Ilupeju @akeemolabisiilupeju300449
Thank you for getting the message. Your comment is quite appealing and encouraging.
25 days ago
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Clark Helen @helenclark8045
Hmmm, so is this poem for real or just a warning? The way to the grave does sound like it could be both alluring and deadly. Interesting.
25 days ago

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Akeem Olabisi Ilupeju @akeemolabisiilupeju300449
Yes. It's a poem for real and yet, it's a warning! I must commend you for getting the clear picture of the piece. The message tilts toward either side of the sexes. The lines hold simple message aimed at discouraging adultery. Obviously, what isn't sauce for the goose isn't sauce for the gander!
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Akeem Olabisi Ilupeju @akeemolabisiilupeju300449
Yes. It's a poem for real and yet, it's a warning! I must commend you for getting the clear picture of the piece. The message tilts toward either side of the sexes. The lines hold simple message aimed at discouraging adultery. Obviously, what isn't sauce for the goose isn't sauce for the gander!
25 days ago
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Akeem Olabisi Ilupeju @akeemolabisiilupeju300449
Yes. It's a poem for real and yet, it's a warning! I must commend you for getting the clear picture of the piece. The message tilts toward either side of the sexes. The lines hold simple message aimed at discouraging adultery. Obviously, what isn't sauce for the goose isn't sauce for the gander!
25 days ago
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Robinson Aylin @aylinrobinson3636
The way to the grave is as dark and twisted as the tale itself, but hey, who needs heaven when you've got a ruby-red apple guiding you straight to the goods? Maybe that's why so many ended up with their dignity nailed to a cross… Nah, better safe than sorry. RIP, whoever you were.
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Akeem Olabisi Ilupeju @akeemolabisiilupeju300449
Hmmmn!
11 days ago