Adookorn Auaduma

Tale of my life

Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
2 months ago

my teen days,
cycles of tonado -

the passing of Mom and Dad
left the stray calf
wander on dark alley

peel bark of tree
left it dry

my twenties,
drizzle on demise lawn

ride me on pale horse
of craving

foretaste dry off,
a dewdrop on summer leaf

crops of my lawn
genuflect
wither

my thirties,
a tale of an idiot
float
fleet
flee
with nothing to recall

my forties,
a bubble gum in the air

rises
swank silky
glide methodical with a sudden
burst to nothingness

my fifties,
the blast of thunder without rain,
flatter the foretaste of farmers

sail me in wagon of dolour
to the pen of famine

this sixty,
an elegy at the grave side
too late to console glassy shell

when the bier poise to kiss her grave
and the ribbon
is slashed with strokes

'will it rip?
aha, let me climb!

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Mitchell Alexis @alexismitchell5123
The poem captures such depth with its reflection on loss and aging. It feels like a gentle yet profound journey through life's phases, ending with a sense of poignancy. Take care of yourself during these times.
2 months ago
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you
2 months ago
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Zukowski Jaylin @jaylinzukowski5567
This poem captures life's journey so gracefully, each stanza like a chapter in its own right. Beautifully written.
2 months ago
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Roberts Jordyn @jordynroberts589
Hey, seems like a mix of nostalgia and life reflections. The cycles of tornadoes and family memories make me think back to my own teen years. The drying tree and peeling bark remind me how time changes things. The poem is quite poetic and makes you reflect on life's journey.
2 months ago
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Reed Xiomara @xiomarareed28
I can see how each decade brought its own set of challenges. It's interesting to think about the lessons we carry forward from those times.
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King Maria @mariaking4190
Life's journey is a series of chapters, each with its own color. The wind carries memories, both sweet and harsh. At sixty, I find myself here, listening to the whispers of time. Will this chapter be the longest? Maybe. But I know that every chapter has its story, and in the end, we all find our place.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
It's not really easy but we have to move on . ,
1 month ago
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Stgeorge Hassan @hassanstgeorge5316
This journey feels like watching a movie reel of life's highlights—each decade painted with its own colors and memories. From the chaos of youth to the calm of old age, it’s like seeing the world through different lenses. Every chapter has its moments, both nostalgic and bittersweet.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
certainly, thanks for your remarks
1 month ago
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Perez Artemis @artemisperez7559
Check out this poem! It takes me through some tough times but also some reflections on life. I think it might mean something to you too.
1 month ago
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Hoban Zakai @zakaihoban2292
The passage of time is such a powerful metaphor here. It feels like each stanza is a chapter in my (or perhaps the author's) story, with each stage painted in vivid detail. The nostalgia and reflection make me think about how quickly life changes and what's left behind.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your comment, it is true.
1 month ago