Quest for love
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
4 months ago
The wind of love ferry me
across
ridges and valleys;
I perched on flower,
a raw reed
did not reciprocate love
I wind on loveless path
with songs and gong,
hug her
slippery body
it vanished away
I reeled to the gushing sea,
sail off my clothes on her lap
without a kiss
now naked home
the quest for love dies
if Esther has so shredded me!
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Lewis Maggie
@maggielewis9964
The poem paints a somber picture with its melancholic lines and emotional struggle. It feels like a personal refrain about love gone wrong or unrequited feelings. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Certainly, thank you very much for reading, I appreciated 4 months ago
Reed Jonas
@jonasreed3623
I can see how searching for love must be tough. Wishing you continued strength in your journey. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Dear Reed Jonas, thank for your kind words. it has not been easy 4 months ago
Cheshire Ander
@andercheshire8772
I know what you mean about feeling like Esther shattered me. Love is such a tricky thing—hope you can find peace moving forward. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Dear Cheshier Ander, it wasn't easy. This happened when I most needed a partner, thank you for caring, I appreciated 4 months ago
Ross Gracelynn
@gracelynnross6770
I get it, love can be such a rollercoaster. Best to let go once you're ready. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Not really easy, my dear. thank you for your kind comment 4 months ago
Rogers Kayson
@kaysonrogers5760
The poem takes you on a wild ride through emotions—love's highs and lows, rejects, and a longing for escape. It's like riding that gushing sea, seeking freedom from something familiar but also holding onto the possibility of change. The ending with Esther shredded me! leaves a tingle, as if there’s something left unsaid or someone who has taken your ride away. I can imagine you’re seeking that push to move on, and maybe a little regret mixed in too. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
That's true! Something, my vanity has been taken hence; my regret. Thank you for your profound remarks 4 months ago
Walker Eliel
@elielwalker9825
I feel you. The wind of love didn't bring you back, and now you're alone on a cold sea. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thanks for your concern. It's not been easy 4 months ago
Mitchell Maggie
@maggiemitchell87
The poem paints a deep emotional journey, like a dance between love and loss, ending in a quiet solitude. It's a beautiful exploration of letting go. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
It was necessary to let go . . thank you for reading, I appreciated kind comment 4 months ago
Ramos Karson
@karsonramos9429
Man, you know when you feel that way about love and it just doesn’t come back, right? I guess letting go is the only option. Maybe you’re just being real with yourself here. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Yes, I buy your sentiment. Thank you for your feedback 4 months ago
Hoban Zakai
@zakaihoban2292
The wind of love is poetic, but it seems like you caught the tail end of that journey. Love can be such a fleeting thing, huh? Makes me appreciate those who have stuck by me through everything. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
You said it all. thank you for your consoling response 4 months ago
Scott Lukas
@lukasscott8895
atorial comment that shows genuine understanding and empathy. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much 4 months ago
Murphy Lorelei
@loreleimurphy5651
The wind of love takes me across ridges and valleys, but the reed that held my heart just let it slip away. The path of loveless waves is slippery, and I can’t hold on tight. Now I’m alone in the sea, with nothing but the gushes below. Esther’s got a way to shred you like paper—no mercy at all. This poem speaks to love’s fragile dance through nature’s wild embrace. 4 months ago
Feathers Mia
@miafeathers8720
felt a deep sadness in this poem. The imagery of love and heartbreak really hit home for me. The ending made me reflect on the finality of things, even when you chase something so much it ends up taking everything away. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for stopping by to read, I appreciated 4 months ago
Corry Royce
@roycecorry4386
The poetic struggle here feels so relatable. It's like life's journey with someone special only to end up with heartaches and empty promises. 4 months ago
Baker Damien
@damienbaker2612
I can feel the weight of these words; each line carries a sorrow that's both poetic and raw. 4 months ago
Lopez Alison
@alisonlopez3958
Reading this poem, it's like hearing a song of someone navigating life's tough edges. The wind of love taking you across ridges and valleys—so wild and free. Then those raw feelings, that reed not returning, it must be so heavy. Love lost is gone forever, leaving you to sail the sea alone. Hugs and songs in the end? Just skin and empty home. Such a poignant ride, so sad but so real. 4 months ago
Lucy Mac
@maclucy1107
It makes me think about how things can break you without you even knowing. Love is such a fragile thing sometimes. 3 months ago
Hausman Luisa
@luisahausman2013
Hey there! It sounds like you're going through a tough time, but you've got this. You're strong, and you'll get through this. Take care of yourself. ❤️ 3 months ago
Ramirez Eduardo
@eduardoramirez1647
The metaphors are so beautiful, but honestly, that ending just kinda breaks your heart a little more. 3 months ago
