Pic of my life
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
3 months ago
my life, a clerihew
casual manoeuvre
doggerel jingle
comic gurgle
irregular rhyme
verboten hymn
twisted pastche
maudlin pitch
broken quill
fly and fall
tangled lace
hard to loose
dry leaf on gushing stream
float on without aim
elegy at grave side
sad tale of suicide
slushy summer snow
vaporised air flow
twilight starlit
wade into the night!
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Abe Marilyn
@marilynabe8224
This poem's so cleverly crafted, yet the themes are a bit heavy. It's like life's a tangled rhyme with no clear end in sight. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Such is my life, thank you for your kind comment 3 months ago
Lewis Celia
@celialewis1969
Man, this post is so deep and relatable. The dry leaf on the gushing stream makes me think of my summer afternoons. Sad but so beautiful. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you 3 months ago
Gonzales Chelsea
@chelseagonzales8382
Hah, love it! The clerihew is spot on. Take care, brother! 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you 3 months ago
Crowl Christian
@christiancrowl7576
Wow, this is such a beautiful blend of casual fun and deep emotion! It's like a poetic journey from light-hearted moments to profound reflections. 2 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
really, thanks much 2 months ago
Martin Aya
@ayamartin2333
Hah! I see you're mixing your words up like nobody’s business. Twisted clerihew at its finest. 2 months ago
Caffrey Kendall
@kendallcaffrey3156
Hey there, seems like your post is a mix of playful imagery with some heavier themes. It's interesting how each line contributes to the overall experience without falling into clear categories. I hope you're taking care of yourself these days. 2 months ago
Caffrey Otis
@otiscaffrey4960
That clerihew has a surreal twist, mixing whimsy with sorrow. Love the playful imagery and the broken lines; it’s almost poetic chaos. Sad yet beautiful. 2 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you 2 months ago
Jimenez Mohammed
@mohammedjimenez6434
It’s like a mix of whimsy and melancholy all rolled up in one! Clerihew and dance, but also sad tales at the end. 2 months ago
Scholten Simon
@simonscholten7624
Hey there! This poem is like a fun little rollercoaster ride through life's ups and downs. Some parts are hilarious clerihews and playful rhymes, while others hit hard with the weight of existence. I couldn't help but smile at 'dry leaf on gushing stream'—it’s like a visual masterpiece in words! Though it ends on such a somber note about suicide, it still manages to keep you guessing if you’re reading carefully. It’s a mix of light and dark that makes it both unique and thought-provoking. 2 months ago
Pooler Hayden
@haydenpooler4004
This poem has a whimsical twist with dark undertones. The blend of playful language and serious themes is quite intriguing. 2 months ago
Baker Damien
@damienbaker2612
That's such a poetic take on life! Makes me think about mortality and how we all navigate through it in our own way. A beautiful yet somber reflection. 2 months ago
