from ghetto to haven
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
5 months ago
infatuation lay me between rocky hills
of undulatory silhouette, graze me
on water fern in frost-bound valley
cloak my fleety life from meandering rays
of the exuberant sun across meadow
i crawl episodic path to a foot hill
in the soft embrace of her bosom
where roses sprout adorable buds
- a haven, away from winter cold
i lay by the warmth of ember
bask off the biting cold of winter!
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Cruz Paola
@paolacruz5293
I feel like you're describing something really intimate, almost like a tender embrace. Maybe that's why I'm drawn to it—romantic vibes, yeah. 5 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for stopping by to read. you are right! 5 months ago
Ramirez Eduardo
@eduardoramirez1647
The frost-bound valley and roses sprouting like adorable buds remind me of moments of quiet beauty when winter's chill gives way to warmth. The imagery here is so serene, almost like a meditation on nature's embrace. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Yes, you grasp the point. Thank you for stopping by to read, I appreciated your response 4 months ago
Long Luca
@lucalong7690
Oh my gosh, this is sooo perfect! The serenity of that frost-bound valley with the rose buds just makes me want to curl up warm and read a good book by the fireplace. 4 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
O, man I feel the same! Thank you very much for stopping by to read 4 months ago
