Adookorn Auaduma

Flower grown in the dark

Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359

5 months ago

in shrouded gloom a lone rose grow
enchanting, psychedelic and sacral
with soft buds cloaked in dark paw

not obvious to the eyes of anthophiles;
its golden value draped in haze
lie waste, oozes ambrosial fragrance

into the blind dark of withdrawal;
its glow dim still, lost sentience
of belonging; sprouted on soil

of dark heritage, it grow spineless,
its laurels hidden in mousy body suit ;
alluring flower grown in dark ambience

away from sun light lacks the caress
of noon breeze, hearty love song
of birds seeking flower to pollinate

but birds of insight buzz through
dark, fondle the buds of cloaked rose,
flex amazing union of continual glee!

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Haider Belle @bellehaider7054
It's like a hidden gem in plain sight, waiting to be discovered by nature's touch. Maybe that woman just needs some breeze and sun to feel the love again.
4 months ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for stopping by to read
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Charleston Adaline @adalinecharleston9155
Check out this poem about a hidden beauty! The gloomy rose has its own kind of enchanting allure, even if it's not immediately obvious. Its golden glow in the dark seems almost magical. Even though it's surrounded by dark palettes and humble beginnings, there's something really special about it. Maybe you'll find its quiet charm when you least expect it.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
You grasp the message, thank you very much for your feedback
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Howard Emir @emirhoward1584
The poem captures such a serene yet haunting beauty! Just like that lone rose, I find solace in the quiet moments my roses bring. They’re truly a reminder of nature’s resilience and allure.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
certainly, roses represents beauty. thank you very much for reading, I appreciated your insightful response
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Moore Yara @yaramoore5650
The rose seems to symbolize something profound—maybe letting go and letting nature take its course. The dark soil and sun seem like a metaphor for growth under challenging circumstances. It’s quite poetic.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much, I'm happy you stopped by to read
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your kind comment
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Roane Theo @theoroane1182
That's such a vivid description! It sounds like a perfect companion.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your response, it matters alot to me
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Rodriguez Kelvin @kelvinrodriguez6612
The poem is poetic and mysterious, painting a dark yet alluring scene. It seems like an abstract exploration of hidden beauty and withdrawal. I wonder if the rose represents something about losing touch or belonging.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
your response added layers to my bright day. Thank you very much for your remarks. persevere is open to interpretation
4 months ago