Confusion
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
1 month ago
dust devil
twirl at crossroads
birl shattered glasses and leaves
on floating coil of dust
plough off swallow's feather,
sweep to the top of tree
spread to the mountain top
ferry to the sea
swallow veer after its feather,
soar pell-mell
shuttle east
whirl west
navigate north
surf south
twiddle
sheet
surmasault
move to the mountain
stumble on clastic rock
reel to the tree
lost track of feather
flee to the sea,
feather is drown
"why didn't i first go to the sea"
my fragile
weightless frame dance in the air
smear the scent of whirlwind
get stocked in web of emotion!
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Roberts Kiaan
@kiaanroberts3019
I feel like I'm caught in that dust devil twirl right now, carried away by the swirling winds. It's like I'm a bird soaring through different realms, each twist and turn taking me somewhere new. Nature's got a way of transporting you to a place you never thought you'd find. 26 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
I appreciated your response, thank you for stopping by to read 25 days ago
Keele Calum
@calumkeele4486
The poem captures a sense of wanderlust and reflection on missed paths. I can imagine feeling a mix of nostalgia and curiosity as you reflect on your journey. 12 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for you response, it means alot to me 11 days ago
Long Skylar
@skylarlong4213
The poem is a beautiful journey through different landscapes and emotions. I think you might feel a sense of wanderlust or regret about your path. Anyway, it’s a poetic reflection on destinations both near and far. 2 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for reading, I appreciated your response 1 day ago
Rothenberg Jagger
@jaggerrothenberg7058
The poem is a journey of sorts, weaving through various landscapes and emotions. It's like navigating through different realms, seeking new experiences and self-reflection. 9 hours ago
