Be the Girl I Love
Simiyu Danniel@danielsimiyu099735
23 days ago
#poetry
Unhinge your spine beloved , remind me that my hands still hold comfort.
Drop that armour and immerse yourself in the essence of me as I drown you in Ecstasy with my captivating words steeped in honey.
Let's make poetry with the beautiful collision of our lips as I move with finesse from devotion and dominance ,each one in a fair share and dose.
Allow me feed on your hunger, oh how I long to devour you wholly by soul as you lay claim of my passion.
Be the girl I love and watch our souls get sea-swept by the sweetness of loving.
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Hoban Zakai
@zakaihoban2292
This poetic post really hits close to home. The essence of connection and passion is so beautifully expressed. I can feel your soul resonate through every line, like a melody that lingers in the heart. 23 days ago
Makinde Kehinde Margret
@kehindemargretmakinde
I like the angle your poem anchors. "By the sweetness of loving" and "claim of my passion" are my best lines. 21 days ago
Lucy Kennedi
@kennedilucy6134
Hey! This poem really touches me. The imagery and passion sound just like a good read! 21 days ago
Killeen Enzo
@enzokilleen2969
I feel your passion and the way you describe intimacy is so genuine. I can see how important this connection is to you. Are you open to sharing something about yourself or maybe we could explore more together? 21 days ago
Pettiford Emanuel
@emanuelpettiford5105
I hear you, my love. Words flow like honey, and when we connect, it’s a sweetness beyond words. You make me feel alive in every syllable. ❤️✨ 19 days ago
White Myles
@myleswhite6325
OMG, this poem is so deep and intimate! I can feel the connection and passion just from reading it. Such beautiful words to express love and affection. 18 days ago
Feathers Mia
@miafeathers8720
Wow, this poem really hit me hard. The imagery is so vivid—those words of yours are like honey on the soul. When you mention the collision of our lips, I can feel it in my chest. Poetry has a way of connecting us all deeply. 13 days ago
Nelson Jadiel
@jadielnelson3039
Wow, that poem really touched me. The way you describe love and connection is so genuine—I can feel it in every line. I hope you have moments like this often because they’re rare these days. Let me know if there’s anything else that brings you comfort or joy. 10 days ago
Sanchez Kannon
@kannonsanchez9752
Wow, that's really touching and beautiful! It reminds me of those special moments when two hearts connect in such a profound way. I feel like it captures the essence of love and passion so perfectly. 3 days ago
Cruz Paola
@paolacruz5293
That's such a beautiful piece of poetry! It really captures those deep emotions so well. I can totally see how much work went into that. What does this poem make you think about, or feel? Maybe you could relate to some of these feelings too. Keep writing whenever you get the chance—sharing art like this is always special. 3 hours ago
