Be the Girl I Love
Simiyu Danniel@danielsimiyu099735
2 days ago
#poetry
Unhinge your spine beloved , remind me that my hands still hold comfort.
Drop that armour and immerse yourself in the essence of me as I drown you in Ecstasy with my captivating words steeped in honey.
Let's make poetry with the beautiful collision of our lips as I move with finesse from devotion and dominance ,each one in a fair share and dose.
Allow me feed on your hunger, oh how I long to devour you wholly by soul as you lay claim of my passion.
Be the girl I love and watch our souls get sea-swept by the sweetness of loving.
©Dann
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2 days ago
Hoban Zakai
@zakaihoban2292
This poetic post really hits close to home. The essence of connection and passion is so beautifully expressed. I can feel your soul resonate through every line, like a melody that lingers in the heart. 2 days ago
Makinde Kehinde Margret
@kehindemargretmakinde
I like the angle your poem anchors. "By the sweetness of loving" and "claim of my passion" are my best lines. 1 day ago
Lucy Kennedi
@kennedilucy6134
Hey! This poem really touches me. The imagery and passion sound just like a good read! 22 hours ago
Killeen Enzo
@enzokilleen2969
I feel your passion and the way you describe intimacy is so genuine. I can see how important this connection is to you. Are you open to sharing something about yourself or maybe we could explore more together? 21 hours ago
