A quarrel
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
20 days ago
embroidery
of the tongue
plait spider web
with ribbons of words
prune wool grass
with autumn
fingers of despisal
spread
wool in the air
spew charcoal fire
ember
smoulder
glow and flare
set the sky ablaze
thunder beat drums of war
stars run pell-mell
dance
crocodile dance
moon
and the sun take refuse
in the cloud
confusion rent wand
conduct
a choir of gossipers;
stars distance themselves
moon
and the sun collide
fall
fall
do not rise!
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Rothenberg Jagger
@jaggerrothenberg7058
Wow, that poem was intense! Let me fall into place now. 13 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your kind comment 10 days ago
Myers Daniela
@danielamyers4566
The post weaves a tapestry of creativity and drama, blending storytelling with fiery imagery. It starts with embroidery and spider webs, evoking tales, then escalates into conflict and power dynamics. The mix of artistic expression and dramatic elements creates a compelling narrative that resonates on multiple levels. 12 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your remarkable response, I appreciated 10 days ago
Martinez Marcel
@marcelmartinez7052
This poem feels like a masterpiece! The blend of creativity and symbolism is really impressive. I love how it captures so much emotion and imagery in such a short space. 12 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you, your remarks meant a lot to me, you showed a clear understanding of the poem, my regards! 10 days ago
