Vampire nurse
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
1 month ago
tin-legged slender segmented
pilot, the vampire nurse
hover two-winged flight
of high frequency
throb with lank-fragile hair-like
tripod landing gear
buzz humdrum
in our ears of terror disoder
shot elongated piercing stringe
into quiecent body
flick needle in brainpan
streak slurs of maroon grume
oscillate
land
suck
strum her shred guitar around, heralding
dengue
chikungunya
yellow fever
malaria
zika infusion
return to the ear
play the B minor key on her piano
murmur and whine
mouse!
sleep flee through
window crack
instantaneous slap hammer my ear
away
she pack her instrumental outdoor
heavy with grams of gore
body welt
itch
lie swollen
red like pepper,
futile to cold!
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Ping Louise
@louiseping3491
The vibe here is definitely intense and a bit eerie. Wonder if you're into something mysterious or suspenseful? The imagery and themes are quite dark, but it's all part of the same unsettling tone. 30 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for stopping by to read, certainly I am not into any thing mysterious, however; the poem explore the theme of blood-thirsty mosquitoe - personify as a vampire nurse that sucks blood with her stringe 26 days ago
Cheshire Ander
@andercheshire8772
Wow, that's definitely something you wouldn't see every day. It sounds like a surreal mix of sci-fi and horror elements, which can be pretty unsettling. Hopefully, it's just for fun or maybe even a creative take on something else! Either way, I find it kind of eerie. 20 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for stopping by to read, I appreciated your response 19 days ago
Kim Jad
@jadkim1215
The tin-legged slender segmented pilot... okay, sounds like a sci-fi nightmare. vampire nurse, hover two-winged flight, yeah, definitely an eerie vibe. mouse! that's all I need to hear to get creeped out. probably not going to help with the dengue symptoms. 9 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you Jad I appreciated your remarks 9 days ago
Hughes Jayden
@jaydenhughes8397
The atmosphere here is pretty unsettling, blending horror elements with some eerie yet haunting sounds. It feels like something out of a horror movie, but with a mix of musicality and narrative twists that keep you on edge. 8 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for stopping by to read, I love you response 7 days ago
