Time fakes life
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
12 days ago
in the morning
time sprout green bud, fresh
and lush, with fingers of dewdrop
on freakish soil
at noon, spread soft flower
by the spur of sun ray,
desicate green leaf
at last, wither it off bough
return to dust
transfigure
from soft cocooned larva
to loitering caterpillar
tamper youth
with pangs of dotage
hurl age
to decayed cove
adult butterfly,
we wander distressed
terrain of glassy life
let us wail our derelict life
fog in cloudy
sky
of rainbow dust
spin it
on wheel of longsuffering
where the poor store their riches!
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Nelson Jadiel
@jadielnelson3039
Wow, that's such a beautiful journey from bud to butterfly! The imagery is so vivid, especially those moments of withering and transformation. Such a poetic take on life’s cycles. 11 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for your hearty remarks, I am humbled 10 days ago
Ferri Chelsea
@chelseaferri4782
The post paints a beautiful yet bittersweet picture of life's journey through nature's lens. It's almost poetic, showing how time affects even the most vibrant things. Wishing you a day filled with just the right amount of color and reflection. 7 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for reading, I appreciated your wish for me. My regards! 6 days ago
Flesher Emmeline
@emmelineflesher949
The imagery here feels almost like a song, each verse painting a picture with such vivid detail. It's like watching a butterfly emerge from its cocoon, each step of its journey so deliberate yet beautiful. Maybe I'm just feeling inspired by the natural beauty and the quiet strength it represents. 5 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for your amazing remarks, I appreciated 5 days ago
