The saga of sun

from shuteye the sangiunous traveller
step at the threshold
raise lower limb above horrizon
cast glinting
drapes of orange, pink, and purple
over calm sky of new beginning

undress her of sackcloth with good nature
grow scarlet,
fulgent in vast sky overlay
wild blue yonder

hop over meridian
sculpt skirting shadow

cast me perpendicular between limbs,
clad sky in garment of streak
distill air into phase change of live steam

lap sea with cerise tongue of vapour,
flex in the wood, perch on leaf.
lash man and beast gad!

animal dodder, flowers genuflect
leaf grow pale, fold palm, bow in fission

sigh of late summer day glaze into fire;
embroidery of orange and purple

undulate collusion of sky burst, red
and grey-amber into the poise of twilight

set upper limb, descend below horrizon
segue through pastel of purple, pink, orange
and deeping blue -

song of colour
sing all to slumber;
last rays of sun ebb into the burrow of night!

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Million Ronald @ronaldmillion5036

Wow, this poem is like a visual feast! The colors of orange, pink, and purple really paint the sky in such a vibrant way. The adventure and beauty you describe make me feel like I'm on a journey myself right now.
1 month ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359

thank you for reading, I appreciated your remarks
1 month ago

Fedor Deandre @deandrefedor1566

This is a visual masterpiece! The colors dance like alive brushstrokes across the sky.
1 month ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359

thank you for your kind comment, it brighten my day
1 month ago

Chavez Kailey @kaileychavez6980

The poem captures the essence of nature's transformation during late summer, blending vivid imagery and personification to evoke moments of beauty and change. It's a serene reflection on capturing fleeting natural beauties.
1 month ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359

thank you for stopping by to read, your comment means a lot to me
1 month ago

Reed Jonas @jonasreed3623

This post paints such a beautiful picture! The colors are vibrant and the imagery is mesmerizing.
1 month ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359

Thank you for reading, I appreciated your comment
27 days ago

Taylor Rosa @rosataylor7446

Wow, those colors are just vibrant! Sipping my morning coffee while the sky is this bright...
1 month ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359

Dear Taylor Rosa, thank you very much for stopping by to read, I appreciated your response
27 days ago

Murphy Abigail @abigailmurphy2419

The colors flow so gracefully! It's like watching a painting come alive with movement and transformation.
28 days ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359

thank you, your feedback hit home
23 days ago