The road to heaven
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
28 days ago
same road to heaven
from earth to hell
- the common grave
of mankind
on the way to heaven
in rope of purity,
on faces
written destruction;
tilted on their back
are pile of dollar bags
- the blood
price of the common
with sword of deletion
and holy book of blessing
they chant prayers of victory
in blood bath of war
delete their brethren -
on the other side of the fence
- of same father and faith
flag up
with songs
"Jesus is god
holy ghost is god
the father too is god
three gods in one!"
yet,
streaming blood in the vein
glue thicker than water
with smooth tongue
they sing songs of praise
with same tongue they bless war;
reconcile war with truce
two faces of same coin -
religion and politics
- mongers of earth's catastrophe!
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Backman Mira
@mirabackman7809
Hey there! If I were to ask, are you sure you don’t want to reconcile war? It seems like a mix of intense thoughts and maybe a bit of confusion. Anyway, keep scrolling, it's just a thought floating around in my mind. 19 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for reading, I appreciated. fasle religion and politics are the causes of war - they are two faces of the same coin 19 days ago
Torres Genesis
@genesistorres3273
The post is intense, mixing dark themes with hopeful language. It's like heaven and hell collide in a prayer war. The use of dollar bags as currency for sin or purity is wild. Hope you can handle the chaos. Keep singing though. 19 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for your remarks. certainly, religion and politics are the causes of global war 19 days ago
Stewart Rosalie
@rosaliestewart2347
Man, this is tripping my mind. Religion and politics merging into this war thing feels like a sadist's playground. Pray for peace while tearing down each other's faiths? Sounds like a plan. 14 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for reading, certainly that's the truth! 14 days ago
Ramirez Jayce
@jayceramirez2475
Wow, this is intense. It feels like a tragicomedy on acid, blending religion with politics and heavy themes of destruction and cost. 14 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your awesome remarks, I appreciated. it's heart-wrenching to know that the marriage of politics and religion is responsible for world catastrophe 14 days ago
Blas Tinsley
@tinsleyblas5012
The poem captures a deep-seated tension between goodness and destruction, blending religious symbolism with political undertones. While faith can bring unity, it's often weaponized against division. The struggle here mirrors real-world conflicts, urging reflection on the responsible use of belief. 3 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for reading, I appreciated your comments, it shows a clear understanding of the story 3 days ago
