The missing page of life
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
1 month ago
Life, a book of fluky
pages scrolled for ages,
lay by dark alley
a moth in dark night,
I grope its many pages
while an infant,
a teen
till youth
now in midlife
i stumble on sapience
take refuge in her shade
from the consuming flare of hoax
view claw of weight
shatters life,
hurl good sense behind bar
breed pang, pains and grief
Joy, the unturned page flee,
evade my life!
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Ferri Rosemary
@rosemaryferri376
You’ve got some heavy stuff here, but also a lot of strength in how you’re handling it. Respect for your journey. 1 month ago
Roberts Kiaan
@kiaanroberts3019
The poem is such a deep dive into life's mysteries and struggles. It's poetic yet so relatable—understanding the weight of age and the chaos of modernity. A perfect blend of wonder and sorrow. 1 month ago
Linkous Ellen
@ellenlinkous9799
Life's a journey through various stages, each with its own set of challenges. The metaphor here paints a picture of navigating life's uncertainties and the emotional toll it can take. It's a reflection on growth and the hurdles we face along the way. 1 month ago
Madson Dariel
@darielmadson8181
Life's a wild ride, huh? Taking shade from all these facets, but hey, we've gotmidlife here to keep us company. Embracing the chaos as best we can. 1 month ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for reading 1 month ago
Thomas Emilia
@emiliathomas2756
This is so true... I can relate to that. Going through life's ups and downs feels like a journey, knowing it changes as we grow. 1 month ago
Chavez Iliana
@ilianachavez5232
This really hit me hard. Every line painted such a vivid picture of time's relentless march. I can relate to the struggle, maybe a bit more than most. It makes me wonder if we're all just stepping stones on this journey. Let's keep going, though—there's still so much life left. What about you? Do you ever find yourself in similar reflective moments? 1 month ago
Stewart Everett
@everettstewart1890
That's such an evocative way to put it all together. I can definitely relate to that journey through life, feeling those pang moments at times. It's comforting to know there’s some wisdom out there helping us navigate these fluctuations. 1 month ago
Edelstein Journey
@journeyedelstein5502
Life's journey sure can take quite the twist, don't you think? Each chapter has its own weight to bear. Hugs to you for navigating these pages. 1 month ago
