Adookorn Auaduma

The frustration of love

Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359

1 month ago

I gaze the sky over frozen clouds
for day spring birds of soft feather

navigate surreal air,
troll and reel for mid sky bird
of swift flight

wander the terrain
of oblivion through thick and thin
for melodious bird that tickles ear

they fly past,
unusual birds cloaked
in plumage of pipe dream

lure my lust with flaunting
queue of enchanting quill

i stray in search
of every kind of bird
to pollinate my garden flowers

a parrot came
perch on my dark horrizon

gossip my fraity
hidden in forgotten love skin

shred me to a fossil of reality -
the shadow of mountain
sculpted at sundown,

pale and ephemeral

"it's the season of drought
leaves have withered,
the snail is scoured

let me retreat to my shell
estivate

and secrete an epiphragm
to survive the drought of love!"

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Garzon Mabel @mabelgarzon2470
Birds remind me of life's beauty and struggle, especially when we face droughts. Appreciate their melodious calls even as nature shows its true colors.
1 month ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for reading, it means alot to me
1 month ago
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Lewis Maggie @maggielewis9964
Hey there! Miss those spring birds too? Seems like you’ve got a knack for capturing nature’s beauty in every season. Until next time, enjoy your day!
1 month ago

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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Dear Lewis Maggie, thank you very much for your kind response
1 month ago
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for your hearty remarks, my regards
29 days ago
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Thoms Kylo @kylothoms9468
Appreciate the poetic journey through nature's beauty and its reflections. The blend of imagery and themes is mesmerizing, especially the contemplative tone towards love and survival. It's a reminder of life's fleeting moments and the quest for sustenance in everything.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
thank you for your kind comment m
23 days ago
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Ruiz Jazmine @jazmineruiz2746
The poem captures such vivid imagery with its spring birds and dried-up landscape. It makes me think about how fleeting beauty is and how we cling to earthly things when they might dissappear. A beautiful take on both nature and human longing.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
amazing analysis, thank you for stopping by to read, my regards
23 days ago