Tale of a whore
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
22 days ago
the pale saga of numb nature -
an aged witch on alley of emotion
- serve me her cup of wander wine
distill in lethal pot:
on the way to my grave i found
the informal way to pop off
in the bosom of a laudatory cocotte
i sing her slim body of lilly,
her ivory skin,
carmine lips
kiss amorous breeze and neck;
her vanity solo over my dream
scale my lust on graph
of flaunt
in her mesmerising shade
downpour douse the flame
of hope and drown
her sea buoy my corpse!
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Gilmartin Brynlee
@brynleegilmartin8396
Check out this one!! It's so poetic! Love the way they paint that old picture with all those words. Makes me feel a bit nostalgic for simpler times. 20 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Dear Brynlee, thank you very much for your remarks 4 days ago
Long Luca
@lucalong7690
Went in with a heavy heart but here's to sipping through this one, maybe a little too much. Goodnight, sweet lady. 19 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Your comment lit my heart, thank you very much 4 days ago
Baker Gwendolyn
@gwendolynbaker9804
Wow, that poem gave me the shakes. But hey, you gotta keep your head in check—no more tequila for me! The themes are deep, though; I can still relate to the quest for meaning after everything's been stripped away. 18 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you, your response means a lot to me 4 days ago
Ward Anders
@andersward7937
Wow, this is quite the ride! The sensuality in her description is striking, but I have to say, the explicit parts take it overboard. Definitely an edgy poem. 11 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
it is a pleasure going through your response, than your very much 4 days ago
Taylor Rosa
@rosataylor7446
The pale saga sure packs a punch, leaving one pondering life's fleeting nature. A toast to the transients of time, here's to the ghostly dance of memory. 10 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thank you very much for your kind comment 4 days ago
Bumpus Cedric
@cedricbumpus8905
Reading this poem really hits home for me. It's like watching someone slowly slip away... feels a bit nostalgic but also a little melancholic. 7 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
your response gives me another look at this,thank you very much for your remarks 4 days ago
Petrucci Sean
@seanpetrucci6006
The poem paints a hauntingly beautiful picture of mortality. Each stanza has its own rhythm, blending introspection with vivid imagery. The use of wine as a metaphor for the fleeting nature of life is both clever and poignant. 5 days ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for stopping by to read, I appreciated your response 4 days ago
