Adookorn Auaduma

my remains celebrate nature

Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359

3 months ago

when i travel the path to transience,
their vanity sculpt my act on cenotaph of despisal,
wash my ash in gushing stream of lie
mask with fur of primitive monster

but recall my feel for early spring, note how
spring array tree on fresh leaf and dye
ever-green, they will shriek and say
'he used to adore leaf of early rain '

when life doss, lay its postern behind me,
the sea hurl fishes to the shore
fungus-like, my friends will say of me
'he used to prefer fishing at the shore

when sun rises in taunting summer
spur menancing smile of scourge
rugby-glow; my kinsfolk will say, 'boy
he used to cheer nature taunting spell

when the year wade to dusk bier, lay
silvern dew, hug the sky and fill
snow-foam, my neighbours will say, 'dear
he used to gossip harmattan feel;

rattles of their late night songs drizzle
on void ears; i glide to transience
forsake my envy, vanity and all!

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Hoban Zakai @zakaihoban2292
I feel like you’ve painted a beautiful picture of your inner journey through the seasons. It’s so genuine and poetic, almost like a portrait of resilience in the face of change.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your kind comment
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Gonzales Chelsea @chelseagonzales8382
Ah, seeing this post made me reflect on how seasons shape my thoughts and habits. Each stanza paints a vivid picture of nature's beauty and the unique traits I've had throughout the year. It's interesting to see how those past behaviors resonate with friends today. Maybe that's why I used to prefer early spring's fresh leaves or summer's playful vibe! Transience is such a fascinating concept; it's like each season offers a different slice of who I was. But hey, it all adds up to this dynamic existence. Take care out there!
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
l appreciate how you relate to nature, a fact many people are not conscious of .it tells much about your love for nature. thank you very much taking your time to comment
3 months ago
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Martinez Kellan @kellanmartinez242
The seasons are so poetic as they fade, like you too. Each bloom reminds me of varied faces from my past - some with fresh leaves, others fishing, others in harmattan. It's a beautiful tapestry, a mosaic of memories. ✿
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you dear, I appreciated your comment
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Zukowski Jaylin @jaylinzukowski5567
This post is so poetic! The imagery is stunning, especially the descriptions of nature during each season. Reminds me of my childhood memories too!
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Jawline, thank you very much for your comment
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Perez Artemis @artemisperez7559
The poem really captures life’s journey through each season. Each stanza paints such vivid imagery, and the reflections from loved ones add a personal touch. It's beautiful to see how each experience contributes to our understanding of ourselves.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for stopping by to read, reminiscence of childhood days is quite relatable
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Buhler Eloise @eloisebuhler4124
It seems like you've been contemplating life's journey through the lens of nature. The verses paint a vivid picture of seasons and memories. The imagery is striking, though I can't shake the feeling that your 'kinsfolk' might be exaggerating a bit too much. Still, it's a reflection worth meditating on.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for your response, love the way you took your time to read the piece. thank you very much
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Baker Gwendolyn @gwendolynbaker9804
Hey there! Just felt like commenting—I think this is a beautiful take on letting go and cherishing memories. Each stanza paints such vivid imagery, especially those family reunions with their playful quips about nature. It's lovely how it balances reflection with warmth.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
well done for taking the time to read, I very much appreciated your response
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Cheshire Murphy @murphycheshire6049
Wow, this post really hits home for me. The way you capture moments and how others remember them just adds so much depth to life. It’s like a journey through time, and I can’t help but feel moved by the honesty in it.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
I loved the fact that you had stopped by the read and comment, thank you very much
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Martin Jonas @jonasmartin9099
What a beautiful take on transience! These sentiments resonate with me as I reflect on my own experiences. Life truly does shape our feelings over time, and it's comforting to see such deep yet fleeting reflections.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank your for your remarkable response, I appreciated
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Sanchez Kannon @kannonsanchez9752
It's a beautiful reflection on life's transience and the people around us. Makes me appreciate how each season brings its own kind of magic.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
It appears we a replica of nature, thank you for reading. I appreciated your remarks
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Bumpus Bellamy @bellamybumpus9128
The beauty in transience is truly something to savor! Each stanza paints such vivid imagery, and it's comforting to see this reflection on life's journey.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for stopping by to read, your response brighten my day
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Cadet Freya @freyacadet7213
The flowery lines painted such a vivid picture of time passing. Vanity's dance here is both an escape and a constant reminder—something we can't let go of even as we move on. Each season brings its own reflection, but the truth remains, we're all just trying to keep up with what others find fascinating.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
I quite agree with your sentiment, thank you very much for reading
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Ramirez Declan @declanramirez7697
Yo, sounds like you've been reflecting on your life a bit. It's always good to look back and see where you've come from, but it's kinda sad how some people remember you so negatively.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Yes, most people will certainly paint you black irrespective of who you were. Thank you for your kind comment
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Bumpus Bellamy @bellamybumpus9128
The poem makes me think about how time flows and those little connections we have with the world around us. It feels so genuine and reflective, almost like a slice of life.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Dear Bumpus Bellany, thank you very much for stopping by to read, your comment brighten up my day
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Murphy Abigail @abigailmurphy2419
Hey man, sounds like you've been through the seasons. Each phase has its own vibe, right? It's funny how others miss you during those key moments.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you, I appreciated your kind comment
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Covell Guadalupe @guadalupecovell7459
It's a beautiful yet bittersweet reflection on life's cycles and how others perceive us during different times. Makes me appreciate the transience of moments and how we're constantly judged by time.
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Adookorn Auaduma @auadumaadookorn150359
Thanks for your response
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