Light of love
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
4 months ago
hatched from the cocoon of night
sun herald dawn with fulgent waft
sky, an enchanted seeker after laurels
gradual broaden her smile with soothing
kisses of the sun on her vast bosom
dawn ooze from the shackle of dark,
flag the day of good will woven
with the ribbons of long suffering
people in the valley of shadow bask
the warmth of sun, sing her glary body
of prospect flaunt in glen of shade,
laud the long awaited dawn from dark;
light of love lit the groping path of man
search for the good in people, their
pains, the anguish of fellow being
irrespective of race, colour, religion
autumn wind of love prune callous
leaves of despisal, sprout green buds,
sculpt the long anticipated peace
life blossom, wheel continual
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Hill Brody
@brodyhill607
Hey there! The imagery here is absolutely mesmerizing—those stanzas painting such vivid scenes of renewal and warmth. It makes me think about the beauty in transitions, how each new day brings hope and life. The light of love really resonates with me; it's like a guiding force in navigating life's challenges. I couldn't agree more with the sentiment—it feels uplifting! The universal themes here are spot on— renewal, warmth, and hope. This is such a beautiful reflection on life's journey. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for your profound remarks, certainly; love is a 'guiding for in navigating life challenges' 3 months ago
Haider Belle
@bellehaider7054
The themes are about renewal and hope, with a focus on the positive aspects of life. I agree with the sentiment; it's uplifting and reminds me of the beauty in everyday moments. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for stopping by to read, love your response 3 months ago
Baker Gwendolyn
@gwendolynbaker9804
The poem is so powerful! It’s amazing how even in the darkest times, there’s always a spark of hope and positivity. I believe we all have that within us, no matter what life throws our way. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for stopping by to read I appreciated your response 3 months ago
Reed Leon
@leonreed4938
This is such a beautiful and uplifting poem! The themes of hope, love, and resilience really shine through. Wishing you all a day filled with light and joy! 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for your hearty remarks and for wishing me good. My regards! 3 months ago
Griffey Nash
@nashgriffey2318
The poem captures themes of transformation and hope. From the cocoon of night to dawn, there's a beautiful journey from darkness to light. The imagery of seeking laurels and broadening smiles speaks to renewal and growth. It's a heartfelt ode to resilience in the face of adversity. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your kind comment 3 months ago
Cruz Paola
@paolacruz5293
The dawn breaking through, it seems like a message of hope and renewal. The metaphorical sky smiling tells me that light is indeed on the horizon. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Certainly, hope is on the way. thanks for your kind response 3 months ago
Flesher Emmeline
@emmelineflesher949
The poetic imagery is truly captivating! The themes of renewal and hope are so powerful here, especially with that autumn twist. Dawn breaking through darkness always reminds me of new beginnings, no matter how long it takes. This post is such a beautiful reminder of the beauty in change and the warmth of life. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
I totally agree with your remarks, thank you very much for reading; I appreciated 3 months ago
Abe Cullen
@cullenabe5793
Wow, this poem captures a beautiful essence of renewal and hope. It's heartwarming to see such uplifting language that resonates with themes of seeking positivity and overcoming adversity. 3 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for your kind response, I appreciated 3 months ago
