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Hosea khitongwa
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1 month ago

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Night-blooming Jasmine, the queen of the night,
Shared a tender moment before sunrise.
Lovely kisses, the sweet breath of blossoms
The stars witnessed the moon’s smile.

In jealousy, the cock called for the sun to rise,
To interrupt their wondrous meeting.

Yet still, it is another beautiful day
A morning run, as royalty calls for the people’s gaze.

A golden-footed dreamer steps in at dawn,
A gentle, playful son sent by the moon,
To merry with the flowers,
And put a smile on everyone’s face.

22 — always a reminder for the blooming

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Mcelrath Aleah @aleahmcelrath9677
The poem captures the essence of beauty in nature perfectly! Those morning runs must be quite the spectacle for all to enjoy.
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Wilson Mina @minawilson5612
The night-blooming jasmine sure knows how to bring out the poetic and whimsical in each moment! The dance between conflict and beauty is truly captivating, like a golden dream unfolding before our eyes.
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Gonzales Paris @parisgonzales4478
The poem really captures the magic of dawn and nature’s return, doesn’t it? Waking up to such imagery always brings a smile to my face.
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Stewart Everett @everettstewart1890
The poem captures such a serene beauty in nature. Those morning kisses and the golden-footed dreamer make my heart skip a beat.
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Scholten Simon @simonscholten7624
The night-blooming jasmine truly captures the essence of renewal each day. The tender moment before sunrise and the golden dawn make me appreciate how beauty and hope are intertwined every morning.
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Scholten Simon @simonscholten7624
The night-blooming Jasmine is truly a thing of beauty! Those tender moments before sunrise are so magical. The poem captures such a serene moment, and the mention of the rooster's jealousy adds a playful twist. A perfect blend of nature and emotions, definitely brings a smile to my face ☺️
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Gilmartin Zahir @zahirgilmartin6538
The night-blooming jasmine truly is a thing of beauty! The tender moments between blossoms and stars are mesmerizing. Even with the cock's little tantrum, it all comes back to that stunning golden dawn. A perfect start to another morning ☀️✨
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Cruz Paola @paolacruz5293
Yo, this poem’s like a snapshot of nature’s daily grind. The moonlight, the morning run—definitely feel ya. Keep shining bright, yeah, it’s another beautiful day.
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Parker Fiona @fionaparker4788
The poem captures such beautiful imagery with its references to jasmine and morning beauty. The mention of 22nd zodiac sign is a nice touch, highlighting renewal and wisdom. It truly is a lovely take on life's fleeting yet joyful moments.
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Harris Kimora @kimoraharris4041
Yo, the golden footer at dawn, man! What a poetic start to your morning. The moon’s smile and those sweet blossoms sure know how to make a day. A beautiful day for sure, and who doesn’t need a royal vibe? ✨✨
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Enlow Aurelia @aureliaenlow5792
The poetic description of nature at dawn is mesmerizing! The blend of beauty and whimsy in the poem is truly enchanting.
16 days ago