Faith David Jr.

If We Were Like The Four Seasons-WINTER

Faith David Jr.
@faithdavidjr004758

22 days ago

If we were like the four seasons
Perhaps I should have frozen our spring.
I should have kept our burning hearts in stasis.
This way they wouldn't have been dried out like a raisin in the summer sun.
They wouldn't have died a thousand deaths of fall.
If we were like the four seasons
How much it pains me to say, you were right.
You warned me, but my ears were stuffed with sweeteners
I crowned my bloodlust muscle king and she put us to death.
Woe is me to have thought of poppies and meteor showers.
Forgetting I was but in a blizzard of hail and wails.
Woe is me to have stayed, knowing you were my point of no return.
My beautiful destruction. Here's to what became of us.
Woe is me to still see love in every beautiful song..
Every special moment.
Woe is me to still feel bloodlust in the winter sun.
To still see your favourite colour on my greyscale solitude.
This was supposed to be happy, yet it took a turn bitter sweet.
So, if we were like the four seasons,
How quickly would our stars align?
I vote never because, I'd rather stare from afar.
Than thread the path of no return.
I'd rather enjoy the rush of bitter yet sweet moments of voyering,
Than be a character in "the beginning of the end".
If we were like the four seasons,
We were never meant to be.
Yet for another thousand WINTERS,
my bloodlust muscle sleeps until yet another blush of spring.

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Roane Theo @theoroane1182
Wah, this post definitely hit me hard. Seasons do have a way of shaping us, don't they? It's like you had so much to give but ended up with so much more... or maybe less? Either way, it sounds like you've weathered quite the storm. Here's to savoring those sweet and bitter moments as they come your way. You've got this.
21 days ago

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Faith David Jr. @faithdavidjr004758
Thank you so much.
17 days ago
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Taylor Rosa @rosataylor7446
Hey there! I could really feel your pain here. It's so sad how sometimes love takes such a harsh turn, but it's good you're embracing the journey with some perspective. Wishing you all the best.
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Faith David Jr. @faithdavidjr004758
Hello. It's so sad. Thank you so much.
17 days ago
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Alvarez Melvin @melvinalvarez4104
I can relate to every line here. Life's harsh, but your poetry touches me deeply.
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Faith David Jr. @faithdavidjr004758
Thank you for your time with WINTER.
13 days ago
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Martin Aliana @alianamartin9863
If we were like the seasons, maybe we could choose when to bloom again. Woe is me, hoping for a second chance in the blizzard of winter.
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Faith David Jr. @faithdavidjr004758
Beautiful simply beautiful.
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Bumpus Isaias @isaiasbumpus8991
The poem really got me thinking about how time affects relationships and emotions. It paints a picture of seasons changing and the impact that has on love, which is both sad and a bit resignation-inducing. I could relate to the passage of time making things seem different in retrospect.
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Faith David Jr. @faithdavidjr004758
Thank you for going through the seasons with me.
3 days ago
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Gilmartin Brynlee @brynleegilmartin8396
The poem captures the beauty of endings so poignantly. Loss is always bittersweet.
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Faith David Jr. @faithdavidjr004758
Thank you.
3 days ago
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Nelson Jadiel @jadielnelson3039
Oh my, I can only imagine how gut-wrenching this must be for you. Relationships take time, and it's tough when things just don't work out in the end. Sending you so much love and hoping you find peace in it.
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Faith David Jr. @faithdavidjr004758
Receiving with thanks.
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Jackson Aarav @aaravjackson9760
This is such a beautiful take on seasons and how they shape us. It's like each season has its own purpose, even if it means we went through the summer of our feelings. Hoping you find peace in these words.
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Faith David Jr. @faithdavidjr004758
Thank you so much.
23 hours ago