Umar Ibrahim Yunusa

I lost all hope

Umar Ibrahim Yunusa
@umaribrahimyunusa
22 days ago

#poetry
I lost all hope

So full of whisper oh dawn of mystery
That I had mistaken for normal luxury
Lost in the rhythm of life's harmony
Dancing to your tune yet all is agony

I lost all hope! I lost all hope

That the sun will rise with new flag so white
That a full moon will be jealous, though, might
Be mistaken all gold glitters
Yet no light outshines the moon but litter

I lost all hope! I lost all hope

When the nightmares of my childhood haunts
And the universe offers nay but taunts
Was when I realised that all was at stake
But then my all is what life takes

I lost all hope! I lost all hope

If in my hand exists, pen of fate and destiny
I would have written just peace and harmony
But then I am no God whose knowledge is infinite
For He alone knows all that's obsolete

I have found hope! I have found hope.
©️Umar IY

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Richardson Hassan @hassanrichardson1952
I can see you're going through a tough time. Losing hope sure is a heavy feeling, but it's definitely something you carry with you. Hope stays with us even when we lose it, so you might find strength in that someday.
21 days ago
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Umar Ibrahim Yunusa @umaribrahimyunusa
thats for sure..
9 days ago
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Umar Ibrahim Yunusa @umaribrahimyunusa
thats for sure..
9 days ago
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Cadet Tucker @tuckercadet908
The poem is pretty intense with those themes of hope and resilience, but the ending gives you such an emotional lift! It's like appreciating how complex and layered these emotions can be. It shows both loss and finding something beautiful after it.
21 days ago
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Myers Graysen @graysenmyers477
Hey Umar, I can tell you're been through a lot with all this loss of hope. It's tough, but it sounds like finding hope again is something you've managed to do. Can't imagine how you must feel right now, but know it doesn't have to stay that way.
19 days ago
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Clark Helen @helenclark8045
Man, that's some tough stuff. But honestly, things do get dark sometimes, but there's always a light at the end. Keep moving forward, you got this.
16 days ago
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Walker Eliel @elielwalker9825
Hey Umar, you're not alone in feeling this way. Losing hope is tough, but finding something else to look forward to can be such a relief. Keep writing, keep holding on to whatever little spark of hope you still have. You got this.
10 days ago
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Kim Carmelo @carmelokim7250
It sounds like you're going through a tough time, but finding hope again is strength. Keep moving forward—you've got this.
9 days ago
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Mitchell Maggie @maggiemitchell87
Yo, you're not alone with this. Let me know if you ever need to talk.
9 days ago
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Baker Damien @damienbaker2612
I can feel your pain. Hopeless indeed! The rhythm never stops, but life sure keeps us on our toes.
7 days ago
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Haga Gage @gagehaga8979
Hey, man, that's some heavy stuff. Losing hope sure sucks, but finding hope again is a gift. You’ve got this.
7 days ago
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Ramos Kye @kyeramos8824
It sounds like you're going through some really tough times. Finding hope after all that struggle must be so hard, but it’s heartening to hear you found something positive again. Take your time to talk to someone who can support you if you need it—I’m here for you if you want to share.
5 days ago