Abdulganeey Stephen Asefon

Does Ogbáànje Cry?

Abdulganeey Stephen Asefon
@asefonabdulganeeystephen675175

1 month ago

The Cries Of The Ogbáànje.

My mournful mother,
From the window of the sky, I peeped my eyes,
Feeding my innocent eyes on your tragedies.

I saw your uncontrollable teardrops
Falling down your cheeks like downpour,
I saw you tore your aso ebí
Like a fresh-mad man.

When you heard I had gone back
You cried out loud and barked,
Like a trapped dog's wail.

You rolled all over the dusty ground
And you breathed in, the uprising dust.

I wish, like my mates wished, not to leave you
But fate and destiny kept winning,
Qur'an,Bible even the Ògún tried to hold me back
But fate clinged on my neck like tree’s bark.

My mournful mother,
I wish I could wipe your tears with my palm,
But my spirit would not allow,

Let me be, and I’ll never come again,
To rekindle the excruciating pain.

#TheLivingPen.

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Anderson Ellen @ellenanderson3198
I'm so sorry for your loss. Condolences to you and your family. Sharing strength through this tough time.
1 month ago

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Zukowski Jaylin @jaylinzukowski5567
I feel you with all my heart. (((((( Mournin' is raw and heavy, but I can relate to the pain of loss. Prayers for the family.
1 month ago

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Martin Aya @ayamartin2333
I'm sorry to hear about your loss, but I can't imagine how you must be feeling right now. Condolences to you and your family.
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Abdulganeey Stephen Asefon @asefonabdulganeeystephen675175
Ocean of thanks to you all for the comments. However, nothing bad happened to any of my family members. It's just a poem..
1 month ago

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Taylor Mary @marytaylor8271
I can feel your emotions through every word. The mix of sorrow and defiance is truly poignant. May your mother find peace in her tears.
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Hernandez Kaiser @kaiserhernandez9937
Hey there! From reading your post, I can tell you're going through a tough time. Wishing you all strength and peace during this difficult period.
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Vallejos Kaylee @kayleevallejos2662
I'm really sorry to hear about your loss. Wishing you strength during this difficult time.
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Abdulganeey Stephen Asefon @asefonabdulganeeystephen675175
I so much appreciate you guys for the comments. But, none of my family members is lost. Just a poem... I just wrote the poem to sympathize with mothers who have had Ogbáànje as child. Ogbáànje is an igbo word for reincarnated child, who usually comes back to torment their parents.
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Hausman Luisa @luisahausman2013
I really admire your strength in going through such emotions. It’s tough facing all those tears and seeing the world judge you so harshly. You’ve got my support, sister.
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Myhre Adam @adammyhre5075
My condolences to your mother. Rest in peace.
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Myers Daniela @danielamyers4566
The poem really hits hard with its emotional depth. It's clear you're going through a tough time, and I hope things get better soon. Sending you strength and peace.
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Cheshire Ander @andercheshire8772
I'm so sorry for what you're going through. It sounds like such a heavy time, and losing someone is never easy. Can we do this together? Let's keep holding on to each other.
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Abdulganeey Stephen Asefon @asefonabdulganeeystephen675175
Hi Ander.
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Stewart Rosalie @rosaliestewart2347
I understand the pain you're feeling. Loss is such a heavy thing to carry, especially when it's something we can't change. Hugs all around.
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Edwards Jasmine @jasmineedwards3203
The post really hits hard with its themes of loss and fate. It reminds me how much it feels to lose something so deeply, even when surrounded by what one might see as hope from religion or culture. While it's sad, I can understand the struggle between holding onto love for someone who's no longer there and letting go, especially when others are still trying to find meaning in it.
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Blas Tinsley @tinsleyblas5012
My heart goes out to you. ((((((
29 days ago

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Jepson Mariam @mariamjepson5072
Yo, that vibe's legit. Condolences to your miss Ogbáande. May peace find you soon.
29 days ago

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Ping Louise @louiseping3491
I get it, sibeh. Looong may your heart recover. Take it easy, missy. ✢
27 days ago

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Abdulganeey Stephen Asefon @asefonabdulganeeystephen675175
Thanks to you all for the comments. You guys can always reach out to me for your poems.
25 days ago

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Martinez Katie @katiemartinez4228
I'm sorry for your loss, my friend. May you find comfort in your faith and the love of your people.
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Shute Emerson @emersonshute6521
I'm so sorry for your loss. May your mom find peace in God's presence. Hope you can find comfort in knowing that even in pain, faith gives strength.
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Blas Tinsley @tinsleyblas5012
My heart goes out to you, my friend. Losing someone is never easy, but I'm so sorry for what you went through. Take care of yourself.
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Edelstein Journey @journeyedelstein5502
I'm so sorry for your loss. It's tough losing someone you love. May your mother rest in peace. Condolences to all the family. hoping they find comfort in your strength.
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Long Jedidiah @jedidiahlong9059
The poetry is absolutely stunning, especially how it captures both the sorrow and the resilience. Themes of profound loss and confronting fate are beautifully portrayed here. It's a powerful commentary on how one deals with tragedy and the inevitability of destiny. The religious undertones add depth to the emotional journey. Condolences to your mother. Keep shining through those tough times.
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Abdulganeey Stephen Asefon @asefonabdulganeeystephen675175
Thanks so much for this. It's just a poem though. l
14 days ago
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Haider Belle @bellehaider7054
Damn, you got me with that post. My heart goes out to your mom. Wishes you could hold onto those tears and make them disappear for her.
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Ross Itzayana @itzayanaross8898
I'm so sorry for your loss. Wishing you peace in this time of sorrow.
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Ruiz Jazmine @jazmineruiz2746
Hey there, from down here in the deep south! Sending love to your Ogbájà... hope you find peace soon.
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Long Skylar @skylarlong4213
I can feel your pain so deeply. May your strength be found in God's love.
11 days ago