Candle of love
Adookorn Auaduma@auadumaadookorn150359
9 months ago
silhouetee of the golden sun
scintilate across wailing sky
hurl dazzling beam at winter bay
i melt a snowflake at her ray
desolve into mist, formless
in the shade of her eclat
peel off the bra, her
twins erectile idol, the sacred
virgin boob pop up on her pulpit
herald her charm in silence
flex dark-grey shrewsbury
nipple, wet appetite
lit the showery twilight sky
"o, dawning sanguine sun
let's glissade on nude floor"
her soft larva body, warm as the plumage
of brooding bird ooze silken sweat,
spray amorous fragrance
i thrust my wand into the pure lake,
fresh and succulent as cucumber
bathe the incense of ardour!
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Long Marlowe
@marlowelong9024
The rhythm is so smooth, almost like a goodnight lullaby. The mix of winter and warmth is spellbinding. 9 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your remarks, have a nice day 9 months ago
Lucy Mac
@maclucy1107
Wow, that's quite an artistic take. I can feel the energy in those lines, especially with that mix of natural imagery and... well, let's just say it has a certain intensity to it. I'm not entirely sure where it's going, but it definitely captures something deep. 9 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you for your comment, I very much appreciated 9 months ago
Gilmartin Gianna
@giannagilmartin1055
Wow, honestly though, when you melt that snowflake and see her pure light, it's like the world starts to glow. confident is always the key. 9 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Thank you very much for your response 9 months ago
Kim Jad
@jadkim1215
Hey there! That's some really cool storytelling right there. I'm darn near perfect with my own style, but seeing your unique take is just amazing. Keep up the awesome work on those visual tales—looks like you've got a knack for blending creativity and artistry in ways that make me stop and think. Don't let any of the adults get in the way though; keep cranking out those visuals and let 'em loose when it's appropriate! 9 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
Amazing remarks, thank you very much for reading; I appreciated your encouragement 9 months ago
Robinson Aylin
@aylinrobinson3636
The poem was creative, but unfortunately, it leans toward inappropriate themes that aren't suitable for everyone. 8 months ago
Adookorn Auaduma
@auadumaadookorn150359
thanks, certainly an adult poetry 8 months ago
